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Two Of Me

Contributed by texasman on Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 11:00:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops





Two Of Me

Sometimes it seems there is two of me
But I’m not sure which one I am.
Am I the one that you can trust?
Or am I the one that’ is damned!

I tell myself I know me?
And the other one I can’t see.
It troubles me so, to think I mitt Go
To a place, I should not be.

There is the one that loves the world
And well forever stand by you.
The other one thinks that I will fail
And never be good and true.

One can go on forever
The other lives on a shorter fuse.
Bough want to live forever
And they want to live it with you.

So if it seems that there is two of me
And you don’t know which one I am.
Just pick the one you won’t the most
And the other should never be damned




Copyright © texasman ... [ 2014-06-26 23:00:16]
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Re: Two Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST
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Love the concept here and the flow was immaculate. However, you should do a spell check before you post...
JenniK


Re: Two Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 11:17:42 AM AEST
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cool poem,. great concept


Best,

Invierno



Re: Two Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th June 2014 @ 08:32:49 PM AEST
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good stuff, to tow the heights between
within different sides takes incredible
depth next to or beside the other who maybe has two or more themselves...
never to be damned, one leads to the other
though it's often difficult to understand

how real love grows... impossible as it seems, it does if you're lucky...
sounds as though you are!

Peace!


Re: Two Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 10:46:24 AM AEST
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Very interesting and thought provoking.

I think I am who I am and if there is another me. . .he is buried by the tides of the sea.


Re: Two Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Geneva1223 on Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 10:57:35 AM AEST
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wow i loved this poem this is the best poem i read all day because it relate to me... sometimes i feel like a good person others times my anger carry me to the dark side so i understand and this poem is beautiful




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