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Array ( [sid] => 178526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A soul beyond redemption [time] => 2014-06-13 17:56:01 [hometext] => its easy to blame it on me so you can sleep better at night. even after 5 years ,,,,,,,, [bodytext] => Let my story be told by those who hate me
But truth must be told unconditionally
They will all hate me eventually
I ask for forgiveness and carry the burden of guilt
For her righteousness that I know is overbuilt
Not to redeem myself
Of the pain I’ve caused
it was our moment of weakness
And she blames it on me
Not that I am a virtuous man
I have my demons that comes out every now and then
Beacon of light I’ll never be
A soul beyond redemption
Yes I agree
But tell me the truth and let me know if your conscious is clear and free……………..
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A soul beyond redemption

Contributed by marknaruka on Friday, 13th June 2014 @ 05:56:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Let my story be told by those who hate me
But truth must be told unconditionally
They will all hate me eventually
I ask for forgiveness and carry the burden of guilt
For her righteousness that I know is overbuilt
Not to redeem myself
Of the pain I’ve caused
it was our moment of weakness
And she blames it on me
Not that I am a virtuous man
I have my demons that comes out every now and then
Beacon of light I’ll never be
A soul beyond redemption
Yes I agree
But tell me the truth and let me know if your conscious is clear and free……………..




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Re: A soul beyond redemption (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Saturday, 14th June 2014 @ 02:32:01 PM AEST
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There are always 3 sides to every story. Their side, the other side, and the truth. No one is perfect and everyone has their moments. this was such a powerful and truthful write. I loved it.




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