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Array ( [sid] => 178523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Revolutionary Journey [time] => 2014-06-12 21:27:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I see the stars in the sky crashing down in a day of age filled with rage and revolutionary ways before I elevated to my evolutionary phase.
It enhanced and escalated my passions. created actions that I organized in a dysfunctional fashion.
But at last it gave me a reaction to have compassion.
I couldn't imagine the day I would no longer be a distraction in the contraption.
I rationed the love that I had but I begun to embrace the satisfaction from the smiles of the people.
While the evil finds it's love and peace in the needle.
I use my heart for the peace and the love of the people Until we live peaceful.
I express this peace with my words and they are lethal that invokes the illegal.
The end of the deceitful and the lies through out their cathedrals so that maybe one day we can be equal. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 138 [topic] => 21 [informant] => great-white [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Revolutionary Journey

Contributed by great-white on Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 09:27:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I see the stars in the sky crashing down in a day of age filled with rage and revolutionary ways before I elevated to my evolutionary phase.
It enhanced and escalated my passions. created actions that I organized in a dysfunctional fashion.
But at last it gave me a reaction to have compassion.
I couldn't imagine the day I would no longer be a distraction in the contraption.
I rationed the love that I had but I begun to embrace the satisfaction from the smiles of the people.
While the evil finds it's love and peace in the needle.
I use my heart for the peace and the love of the people Until we live peaceful.
I express this peace with my words and they are lethal that invokes the illegal.
The end of the deceitful and the lies through out their cathedrals so that maybe one day we can be equal.

Copyright © great-white ... [ 2014-06-12 21:27:32]
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Re: Revolutionary Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 10:34:22 PM AEST
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Great write. awesome flow. Loved everything about this. a wonderful message.

Re: Revolutionary Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th June 2014 @ 09:08:41 PM AEST
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rage swells pressurizing arteries and veins/ pain and fear, ordinary stresses
built-in to each and everyone.
evolution, will it ever ease, so many trigger points within each line, what's the proper
revolution we need, what is revolution?
Beatles, revolution #9?
Can a cannula ever deliver resounding
piece of mind?
I smoke the peace pipe, wouldn't it be extraordinarily
cool if say the leader of a large and important country said that to its people instead of taking them into to war?
Actually your writing is filled with so much to think about. I will read it again. Much to be gained in doing so.
Thank you!

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