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[aid] => mick
[title] => Surrender or Success
[time] => 2014-06-05 00:02:05
[hometext] => First try at poetry. I'm sure it isn't any good. But it's real. I know my grammar is Wack and I'm sure my format is too and all that so I apologize for that. Thanks for any input yall give. Positive or negative
[bodytext] => They were together, they were brilliant In her own words they "were doing it in living color" He sat on their old leather couch that was given to them But she had gone, so had his joy and placement in the world, that color had grown dim. 3 years had passed and so much had changed That couch moved place to place and starting to show signs of wear When it was new it it was brilliant red leather, now it'd faded to To a maroon ' ish brown From home to home the the couch was dingy broken in and worn The man the same way, so broke he didn't think he could be any more torn You wouldn't think him pathetic, relatively smooth with the ladies He came off confident adjusted he knew who he was It shows that he'd been hurt a few times and had no intentions of it happening again He'll fight his feelings on a daily basis keeping them all locked up And the girl well she moved on had the family he wanted got her ring finger all rocked up So he's sitting on their couch, used to be the cornerstone if their home Looking back at everything he'd had and lost in the last few years You would think he felt Down sorting through so much darkness But like the flick of a switch he sees the color hadn't faded it was vibrant and had been the whole time Cause that darkness that he's living in, to him is just like sunshine. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 96 [topic] => 43 [informant] => arice88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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