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Maybe, just maybe, that flashy style, has seen its time pass,

Peter found a Harley, a sleek cruiser, if you will,
But Peter needed it better, if his dream bike, were to fulfill,

From his toolbox, he brought to bear,
His wrenches and drills, and into that Harley, he surely did tear,

Liz, his Asian mistress, first watched in earnest silence,
But when the bills found home, it was like a great minus,

The bike is done! Of a kind, it’s just only one,
Styling on this machine, is gonna be fun,

Fire it up! The loud angry growl did spread fear,
That was nothing, it scared the Fat Bike, when Peter kicked it into gear,

On back Liz looked so awesome, and to admirers, she was a treat,
But what was she gonna do, about that awful little seat?

A big fat rear tire, turned many heads on the Pike,
But were they checking out Liz, or really the bike?
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Bikes, Women, and Song

Contributed by JackM on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 08:26:06 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Peter rides a sport bike, quite speedy and fast,
Maybe, just maybe, that flashy style, has seen its time pass,

Peter found a Harley, a sleek cruiser, if you will,
But Peter needed it better, if his dream bike, were to fulfill,

From his toolbox, he brought to bear,
His wrenches and drills, and into that Harley, he surely did tear,

Liz, his Asian mistress, first watched in earnest silence,
But when the bills found home, it was like a great minus,

The bike is done! Of a kind, it’s just only one,
Styling on this machine, is gonna be fun,

Fire it up! The loud angry growl did spread fear,
That was nothing, it scared the Fat Bike, when Peter kicked it into gear,

On back Liz looked so awesome, and to admirers, she was a treat,
But what was she gonna do, about that awful little seat?

A big fat rear tire, turned many heads on the Pike,
But were they checking out Liz, or really the bike?

Copyright Â© JackM ... [ 2014-06-04 08:26:06]
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Re: Bikes, Women, and Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 08:39:34 AM AEST
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A hot Asian with a fine rear spoiler on a small motorcycle seat.....good imagery (if I may delve into a male thought process tasteless pool).

This poem, as I read it, reminded me of the song by Johnny Cash about the car he built.."One Piece at a Time"...it's a 62,63,64, 65 auto mobile.....

Loved it. thanks,

Invierno

Re: Bikes, Women, and Song (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 12:48:53 PM AEST
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Hi JackM
I'm a biker had a few. Well like Invierno said a mans mind is wicked and I can bet you the guys were not checking out that fat back tyre LoL. Great write just love it ;-)

Greetings
Rus

Re: Bikes, Women, and Song (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 01:41:26 PM AEST
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ha! made me laugh! harleys are the only true bike, heh,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Bikes, Women, and Song (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 03:08:22 PM AEST
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Bikes, women, and song..in that order! Lucky you she takes a back seat! I refused and rode my own..long time ago!
Love your closing thought…you know the answer of course, and so does he!
Your poem reminded me of the amazing fragrances enjoyed on a bike. The one-dimensional voyage in a car, can't compare to the ballet of a bike. Thank you for stirring the memories. May your helmet never sit beside the road.
softerware

Re: Bikes, Women, and Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 09:08:34 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

I, myself, would be checking out the bike and Liz!

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