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We are done.

Contributed by Natedog on Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 04:40:18 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I found out today that you are not the girl for me, truth is I'm in-love with my ex, me and her were meant too be, I took her heart and shattered it for you, now I want her back and I'm feeling so blue, yes I am only 15 and stupid, but I feel as if I just got shot in the ass with an arrow from Cupid, see now I know you cheated on me with him, I can't even find the words to begin, your just a dumb cheerleader who loves to do it, well we are over now haha screw it. At first I though you were sweet and nice, but my language couldn't be any more precise, I though we made love but no, I found out today you're just a stupid hoe.

natedog, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE and support our other poets. Please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit. Thank you.

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Re: We are done. (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 01:46:38 AM AEST
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Well, that pretty much says it. Lots of story in this short space! Interesting that it is in paragraph form…the rhyme kept on sneaking up on me!
Made it more textured.
Think we all write about our lives..what other experience do we know as well?
Keep writing…
softerware

Re: We are done. (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 06:50:54 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhhhhh..to be young and feel so vividly....that is the real gift of this piece.

Best,

Invierno

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