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[title] => ~*:pages of time
[time] => 2014-05-31 04:46:54
[hometext] => ...words do not express proper gratitude for all the love you cause...
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my favorite place to be at nightly
at my desk candle burning brightly
happily raiding everyone's poetry
you all make my heart sooo happy
in the dark the rhymes they come
muse now well fed begins to hum
so now is spring the forest grows
tomorrow summer don't ya know
i wanted to be here it is most true
those four years away alone n' blue
almost lost my life i never did roam
by design ypdc you're ever my home
safe here again as whippoorwill sings
beauty of forest sweet joy it brings
except for bear who comes for mail
rubbing butt on fences wagging tail
i wish everyone well w/ many smiles
know as poets you're all worthwhile
n' never lay down your golden pens
i love you xoxoxo all you are my zen
so again seasons have true meaning
can't express easily what i'm feeling
your kindness n' love touch my soul
you have healed a lonely poet whole
§* *§
*|*
♥
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[topic] => 69
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~*:pages of time
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 04:46:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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my favorite place to be at nightly
at my desk candle burning brightly
happily raiding everyone's poetry
you all make my heart sooo happy
in the dark the rhymes they come
muse now well fed begins to hum
so now is spring the forest grows
tomorrow summer don't ya know
i wanted to be here it is most true
those four years away alone n' blue
almost lost my life i never did roam
by design ypdc you're ever my home
safe here again as whippoorwill sings
beauty of forest sweet joy it brings
except for bear who comes for mail
rubbing butt on fences wagging tail
i wish everyone well w/ many smiles
know as poets you're all worthwhile
n' never lay down your golden pens
i love you xoxoxo all you are my zen
so again seasons have true meaning
can't express easily what i'm feeling
your kindness n' love touch my soul
you have healed a lonely poet whole
§* *§
*|*
♥
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ladyfawn
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2014-05-31 04:46:54]
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 06:12:52 AM AEST
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Hello Nessa
Now that's a sweet poem ;-)
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 09:24:33 AM AEST
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Cool beans!
Love this line, "except for bear who comes for mail
rubbing butt on fences wagging tail" Very image evocative.
Yes, I have to confess, this site has become a cornerstone of my day. It's a wonderful way to push my efforts to arrange words, read the sharing's of like-minded souls and (forgive me) get an EARNED ego boost for free, as well as boost others by my pen (or tap).
great little ditty....diggit diggit diggit
Best,
Invierno
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by softerware on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 10:34:09 AM AEST
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What lovely images you call into my mind..You write with a paintbrush! Utterly, my favorite line is last; the summation of your thoughts: "You have healed a lonely poet whole." I wanted to stand up and cheer for you! Welcome back, it is our mighty fortune to have both your artistry and your company to enjoy!
softerware |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 12:09:56 PM AEST
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Dearest Nessa,
Once again, you have allowed a glimpse into your beautiful soul. The imagery is so vivid and the feelings expressive.
If I may be so bold, I would like to give you a rose. If you were wondering, a comment made to In this corner, was one of the reasons and impetus for Only a rose. You have inspired much, dear lady! So very much...
Enjoy the forest in all her splendid glory as the mother we call nature is so much better at art than I ever hope to be...
Many hugs and thanks,
Michael |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 08:33:13 PM AEST
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there is a piece of peace here
reflections of real thought,
A place where I find something
worth reading always
Thank you Ladyfawn!
Peace! |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Spike on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 11:25:46 PM AEST
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lovely homage and account of the 'lost four'. keep reading and posting - its a settled addiction for me!
S. |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 01:13:51 AM AEST
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We love you too, Nessa and I think you expressed it beautifully. |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 04:14:51 AM AEST
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Your respect and affection for ypdc and its members are palpable. Your poem is penned with passion and warmth, and I'm sure your feelings are reciprocated by all who read you.
I like the fact that you write by candlelight, I do too. It's comforting and inspirational, isn't it?
My best wishes to you.
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by JackM on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 02:30:41 PM AEST
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You expressed your feelings very articularly. You create quite the vivid image of yourself, and your home.
I just hope the bear doesn't come for the mailman, haha. |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by colinb on
Friday, 13th June 2014 @ 03:24:00 PM AEST
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| beautifully written Nessa your heart is a pure as the snow |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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Smiling here.....feeling a tad jealous!! I know you know how I feel about YPDC.... and the poets here. Loved your post Ness....
Hugs and woofies..
JenniK |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by spud on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 08:05:59 AM AEST
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Nessa,
Four years absence?? Really??
Well, for our sakes' do this no more. You are much
celebrated amongst your poetry family.
T
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 09:12:11 PM AEST
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Thank you for inspiring me with all of your writes. I have always been fascinated by time. I feel like it always knows something we don't.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: ~*:pages of time
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 18th September 2015 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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Aw, Nessa. You are such a beautiful, and loving soul. I can relate to this so well, and you are such a bright spot here, on ypdc. You make us all feel incredibly welcome and important. Your poetry is always open and honest, and brimming with optimism. You always choose to make a conscious effort to find the light, and the good, even in the midst of despair.
It is an admirable quality, and I love that about you.
Keep spreading your sunshine, and always feel the love of your ypdc family.
~Scorp |
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