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Peephole View of the World
Contributed by
invierno
on
Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 09:00:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I see the world through a little piece of glass
In the middle of my door I watch the people pass,
and I'm sure, they have a place to go
But I'm in here just watching the same show.
Day after day- it never seems to change
It's just a play- you might think I'm strange-
Perhaps I am, but I don't really care,
The more I see, I'm happier in here.
Life is a thief, but it doesn't come at night
During the day it robs us in plain sight,
while we work or even when we play
we give the key to steal our smiles and joy away.
Copyright ©
invierno
... [
2014-05-27 09:00:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Peephole View of the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 09:29:10 AM AEST (User
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Peephole View of the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 02:12:38 PM AEST (User
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Awe my friend. This is a brilliant but sad write. I got a friend of 44 years now he was on coke it broke my heart he is clean now 20 odd years and I'm grateful for that. Grate job. Blessings
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Rus |
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Re: Peephole View of the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 07:24:00 PM AEST (User
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the lonely vision of you using looking through the
peephole is so vivid- have also seen same parade,
this is penned beautifully:) ~thankfully the mind is left
intact, tho on a personal note, sometimes i wonder
about my own! lol,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Peephole View of the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 05:24:26 AM AEST (User
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Nicely done, indeed. The repetition, apathy and solitude of addiction neatly encapsulated. The poignancy of the last line: a grand conclusion. |
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Re: Peephole View of the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 02:32:56 PM AEST (User
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Sad post, yet you found yourself again. Never go back.....but keep posting your talent.
brew~ |
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