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called Forsaken
and
it reminded me
of all the things
that people are experiencing,
Like dreaming.....
or the many things
that are left unsaid.

One flow grooved on good loving
and how it felt
when it was happening,
made me smile as I was remembering
the way that love feels to me.
Another write was so sad
I felt the pain
and let her know
that her words were heard
and that it was okay to feel.

we write to for the release
and sometimes
The comments
give us inspiration
and
keeps us from fading and disappearing,
Life is hard
and emotions can be torture
so it feels so good
when you know
someone is aware of what you are experiencing.

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Forsaken No More

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 11:55:09 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

I was reading a flow
called Forsaken
and
it reminded me
of all the things
that people are experiencing,
Like dreaming.....
or the many things
that are left unsaid.

One flow grooved on good loving
and how it felt
when it was happening,
made me smile as I was remembering
the way that love feels to me.
Another write was so sad
I felt the pain
and let her know
that her words were heard
and that it was okay to feel.

we write to for the release
and sometimes
The comments
give us inspiration
and
keeps us from fading and disappearing,
Life is hard
and emotions can be torture
so it feels so good
when you know
someone is aware of what you are experiencing.

Copyright Â© unknown_utopia ... [ 2014-05-25 11:55:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 12:30:44 PM AEST
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You have taken the time to speak for many of us, and to the one who inspires by her gentle passion. She encourages many here…and now…so have you.
Thank you,
softerware

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 01:14:29 PM AEST
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So true...so true.....thanks.

Invierno

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 03:08:56 PM AEST
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i had fallen asleep by my desk and when i
woke up i saw this poem, it is truly beautiful!
comments give us inspiration and keeps us
from fading and disappearing. your words
speak truth! from your deepest heart
you see into another's soul; this is a trait not
all writers have; or all humans for that matter:
what does it cost us to say a few words of
enlightenment when the other has already
invested so much- ypdc has some fine,
loving, caring, brilliantly talented creatively
beautiful writers, and you my friend are at the
top:)

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->>--

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 09:21:26 PM AEST
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A meaningful write and a wonderful tribute to a beautiful lady!
I say WIN, times two.
Thanks for sharing...

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 09:35:28 PM AEST
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Dear unknown_utopia,

I really love this.

Love the groove.

Thank you!

Peace!

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiny_Tina on Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 01:48:22 AM AEST
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ladyfawn is an inspiration. i can see that she would inspire a poem like this. i like it.

TT

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 02:06:13 AM AEST
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Nessa is definitely an inspiration to us all. I wish more would follow her example.

A mojo flow inspired by the woman we all know!

Nicely done.

Tim

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 22nd June 2014 @ 07:45:43 PM AEST
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...and it was okay to feel

often times I do not believe that it is ok to feel. I am a man, an American man. A man who served in the Army and fought in combat. There are always constraints thrown upon us by others and society, its a terrible feeling. but you are right, it is ok to feel. Thanks for reminding me

Re: Forsaken No More (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 02:14:34 AM AEST
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beautifully said

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