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Array ( [sid] => 17836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I know you aren't proud [time] => 2003-05-20 00:45:00 [hometext] => Have you tried? But he doesn't understand and will never be proud? One day... he will be, promise. [bodytext] => Did I grow up according to planned,
are you proud of me now?
It hurts the most
when you dissaprove all along..
and say ,'where did I go wrong?'
I'm sorry I can't be perfect...
now its just too late...
and I can't go back.
If I could I would do things all over again,
and hopefully change all the things you ever said.
Don't turn your back now-
I just want to talk to you.
You just won't understand.
How can I tell you what is running through my head-
when every time you look at me the tears you shed.
We lost it all
and nothing lasts forever-
and if I could, all the things I ever did...
I would do over...
to hear you say that
for once,
you are proud of me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 50 [informant] => stargazer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

I know you aren't proud

Contributed by stargazer on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Did I grow up according to planned,
are you proud of me now?
It hurts the most
when you dissaprove all along..
and say ,'where did I go wrong?'
I'm sorry I can't be perfect...
now its just too late...
and I can't go back.
If I could I would do things all over again,
and hopefully change all the things you ever said.
Don't turn your back now-
I just want to talk to you.
You just won't understand.
How can I tell you what is running through my head-
when every time you look at me the tears you shed.
We lost it all
and nothing lasts forever-
and if I could, all the things I ever did...
I would do over...
to hear you say that
for once,
you are proud of me.

Copyright © stargazer ... [ 2003-05-20 00:45:00]
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Re: I know you aren't proud (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 04:39:20 AM AEST
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This moved me more than you realize. Brought tears to my eyes. Lovely piece of work here.
Michelle

Re: I know you aren't proud (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 02:25:33 PM AEST
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i recognize a lot of parts of this poem....It sounds a lot like Perfect, by simpleplan? at least a lot of the lines come from that song. Good poem anyway, tho.

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