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Array ( [sid] => 178309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Would Have Happened [time] => 2014-05-11 19:13:33 [hometext] => I'm not really sure how to express myself. I guess I just needed to vent? [bodytext] => what would have happened
had my parents not come through the door at that minute?
things were becoming heated.
you had me pinned to the ground,
kissing me.
you were so gentle.
you went between kissing my neck
and my lips
and my chest.
it was all so nice.
but was it what we wanted?
what if things had gone further?
are we ready for that?
i didn't want you to stop
but i knew it wasn't right.
what would have happened? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 139 [topic] => 2 [informant] => potentialpoet96 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

What Would Have Happened

Contributed by potentialpoet96 on Sunday, 11th May 2014 @ 07:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

what would have happened
had my parents not come through the door at that minute?
things were becoming heated.
you had me pinned to the ground,
kissing me.
you were so gentle.
you went between kissing my neck
and my lips
and my chest.
it was all so nice.
but was it what we wanted?
what if things had gone further?
are we ready for that?
i didn't want you to stop
but i knew it wasn't right.
what would have happened?

Copyright © potentialpoet96 ... [ 2014-05-11 19:13:33]
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Re: What Would Have Happened (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th May 2014 @ 06:08:03 AM AEST
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i see this is under romance but it maybe should
be under a different topic, these are all things
you need to decide for yourself, whatever you do
be smart about it and be safe, blessings,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: What Would Have Happened (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 12th May 2014 @ 07:13:58 PM AEST
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A good question!!! One we can all ask ourselves at one point or another in our lives I'm sure!
Better to be able to ask "What would've happened?" than to wish it hadn't!
What a clever way to remind us to think twice..not many have the benefit of intervention to alter the course of their lives! You are lucky!
Cause you can always go through with it if you change your mind!
softerware

Re: What Would Have Happened (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 02:51:28 PM AEST
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crazy yet impressive. A great question. I wonder.
Things must happen for a reason, no joke. I love this poem it was simple addictive.

Please keep writing.

Re: What Would Have Happened (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 16th May 2014 @ 07:30:57 AM AEST
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potentialpoet96, Well, what would have happened could not be printed here. The fact you ask "are we ready for that?' is a clear indication that, indeed, you were not. If you have to smell a container of casserole, then you don't want to eat it, right? Better defined in a rule: "If in doubt, throw it out".

Your poem is full of questions. This is a wonderful thing. Questions are the seeds from which knowledge and poems grow.

Your moniker 'potential' poet....you ARE a poet now. You have 'potential' to be a better poet. You are asking the right questions to your heart. Let your heart answer them in future poems.

Please keep writing, dear. You are on the right track.

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