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Array ( [sid] => 178211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Whom the Bell Does Not Toll [time] => 2014-04-26 12:25:42 [hometext] => This is what aappens when you mix Hemingway, nostalgia and regret. [bodytext] => I am a brick.
I came from a brick.
Terracotta even, edges clean-
Unblemished prime geometry.

Not for long.
Not for any price.
Losing colour vibrant, true-
My bearing brick, I see, now so far from new.

How do I fit?
In the wall, and quick!
This earth is diminishing me-
I'm wearing down- it's happening! All the world will see.

No easy trick, to be a brick.

I was made.
So Shall I make.
My turn at the stick-
As I was, so I made, a perfect little brick.

Elements are beating me.
Cracks like porcelain erupt.
My begatting brick is ragged now-
Janus mocking me, and how.

My creation? Pride.
Still fundamental-elemental,
Yet fading perfect form of yore-
Brick so hard, and so I tried; delving, always more.

No easy trick, to be a brick.

I was the house.
I am the house.
Now my progeny his own-
Wind and rain; aught to gain, our houses are alone.

Sound waves crash.
Sound waves beat.
The bell's toll is erasing me-
The brick I made has turned away, too late now do I see.


He has his house.
He is his house.
Bell's toll sweet his bricky ears-
It now tolls for him not for me, as I heft my makers fears.

No easy trick, to be a brick.
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For Whom the Bell Does Not Toll

Contributed by invierno on Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 12:25:42 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



I am a brick.
I came from a brick.
Terracotta even, edges clean-
Unblemished prime geometry.

Not for long.
Not for any price.
Losing colour vibrant, true-
My bearing brick, I see, now so far from new.

How do I fit?
In the wall, and quick!
This earth is diminishing me-
I'm wearing down- it's happening! All the world will see.

No easy trick, to be a brick.

I was made.
So Shall I make.
My turn at the stick-
As I was, so I made, a perfect little brick.

Elements are beating me.
Cracks like porcelain erupt.
My begatting brick is ragged now-
Janus mocking me, and how.

My creation? Pride.
Still fundamental-elemental,
Yet fading perfect form of yore-
Brick so hard, and so I tried; delving, always more.

No easy trick, to be a brick.

I was the house.
I am the house.
Now my progeny his own-
Wind and rain; aught to gain, our houses are alone.

Sound waves crash.
Sound waves beat.
The bell's toll is erasing me-
The brick I made has turned away, too late now do I see.


He has his house.
He is his house.
Bell's toll sweet his bricky ears-
It now tolls for him not for me, as I heft my makers fears.

No easy trick, to be a brick.




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Re: For Whom the Bell Does Not Toll (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 02:39:00 PM AEST
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Invierno..I suspect a bit of Dr. Suess has influenced this as well! Nicely structured, fun to re-read; like going back and forth in a swing!
No easy trick to be a poet!
Delightful!
softerware


Re: For Whom the Bell Does Not Toll (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 12:41:36 AM AEST
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solid piece, or quite stationary it is to be,
Thick as a Brick, as though the wise men don't know what it means to be.
I applaud your use of pride, to see what it is worth such a work could not ever be
fake. But if you could bake a fake and make a brick in the end, that would truly be no easy trick my friend.

I see very fine houses all the time
But I wonder what they might mean. I see old torn shelters and understand only the inhabitants from which
I myself came.

This feels more of Frost than Hemingway -
it holds virtue out to me.

Great job!

Peace!




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