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unfolding still the nothingness acts out action acting players
visionless quest requesting a dream
dreams of a scryer to scripwrite the scene


tumultuous tirade razor sharp tongue razor sharp blade
I best get an Oscar for all of the parts that ive played
in this,
oh this, fury filled apathy of echolucent eloquent afore loathing disparious inequivalent veils binary truth
Symbol: ≡ or ↔, as in -(p ∧ q) ≡ -p ∨ -q
symmetry
and can I say can I have my say them,, them battered down hatchets snares imagining sickening quickening freakshows ticketing viewing perpendicular snapshots ad hock apparable conjoined
with wicked contempt sin drone syndrome ee da puss I know you know I know you know
directors cut ouch couch spindle needle vein
alicewhite sheila taylor hippie hipsters key tat 3 triskele tat
just do it decoded nike claithrin spindle apparatus sister chromatids
chromasomal crossover synapsis b4 synaptonmal complex
chiasma
recombination
four game
te test
sister chromatids and quantum entanglement
springs to my mind at this point in pointless pointing time
dots in distant quantum point contacts
contact
confirmed
acoustic spin doctors
acoustic spin tronics
back to the future
and back again
the realization
the point stays the same
all points of view perspective and referential observation
center point are points all made
relativity of simultaneity
skyclad
naught is hidden from sight
hello future
Just to confirm to you that I am getting your signals
and your attempts to make contact have been succsessful,
the human race has mastered time travel and understands space time
just the same as the human race shall master time travel and understand space time
and does in this very moment all of the above,
as above so below.
amazing grace
DO what thou will
test of time
survived?
survived
ha ha my mia
mimacry
shamanic echo
i asked
how scorpians and spiders are related
haunting scorpian and jagged little spider webbing
intricate logos layers
hi fellow thesbians
its great to finally meet
all of you them and us
actors actressess
players.
Akrabh
compassionate and all giving
hare
ha
Antares
skele
I miss my daughter
Demeter?
ceres
temple of set
to Be or not to Be
that is the question
hubble bubble toil and trouble
telescopic mirror image
reflection refraction helix double
xeper
ritual play

Icabus fool
wedding gown
wedding day




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scorpians and spiders relativity of simultaneity

Contributed by alicewhite on Tuesday, 1st April 2014 @ 03:55:45 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical



jagged little spider webbing intricate logos layers ,
unfolding still the nothingness acts out action acting players
visionless quest requesting a dream
dreams of a scryer to scripwrite the scene


tumultuous tirade razor sharp tongue razor sharp blade
I best get an Oscar for all of the parts that ive played
in this,
oh this, fury filled apathy of echolucent eloquent afore loathing disparious inequivalent veils binary truth
Symbol: ≡ or ↔, as in -(p ∧ q) ≡ -p ∨ -q
symmetry
and can I say can I have my say them,, them battered down hatchets snares imagining sickening quickening freakshows ticketing viewing perpendicular snapshots ad hock apparable conjoined
with wicked contempt sin drone syndrome ee da puss I know you know I know you know
directors cut ouch couch spindle needle vein
alicewhite sheila taylor hippie hipsters key tat 3 triskele tat
just do it decoded nike claithrin spindle apparatus sister chromatids
chromasomal crossover synapsis b4 synaptonmal complex
chiasma
recombination
four game
te test
sister chromatids and quantum entanglement
springs to my mind at this point in pointless pointing time
dots in distant quantum point contacts
contact
confirmed
acoustic spin doctors
acoustic spin tronics
back to the future
and back again
the realization
the point stays the same
all points of view perspective and referential observation
center point are points all made
relativity of simultaneity
skyclad
naught is hidden from sight
hello future
Just to confirm to you that I am getting your signals
and your attempts to make contact have been succsessful,
the human race has mastered time travel and understands space time
just the same as the human race shall master time travel and understand space time
and does in this very moment all of the above,
as above so below.
amazing grace
DO what thou will
test of time
survived?
survived
ha ha my mia
mimacry
shamanic echo
i asked
how scorpians and spiders are related
haunting scorpian and jagged little spider webbing
intricate logos layers
hi fellow thesbians
its great to finally meet
all of you them and us
actors actressess
players.
Akrabh
compassionate and all giving
hare
ha
Antares
skele
I miss my daughter
Demeter?
ceres
temple of set
to Be or not to Be
that is the question
hubble bubble toil and trouble
telescopic mirror image
reflection refraction helix double
xeper
ritual play

Icabus fool
wedding gown
wedding day








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Re: scorpians and spiders relativity of simultaneity (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobJowers on Tuesday, 1st April 2014 @ 07:06:14 AM AEST
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It sounds decent
But I think you tried to use a lot of 'complex' words more than what was necessary to deliver the message.


Re: scorpians and spiders relativity of simultaneity (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 1st April 2014 @ 10:31:21 AM AEST
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This is a mess. The only thing I found "mysterious" about this is the fact you couldn't spell something simple like 'scorpion' properly, yet you try too hard to dazzle with more intricate words. I feel like I am reading someone's acid trip.

Sorry, but this is no good. I have read much better from you.



~Scorp


Re: scorpians and spiders relativity of simultaneity (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiny_Tina on Thursday, 3rd April 2014 @ 12:20:26 AM AEST
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????????? should have stopped at the first verse!!!




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