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Array ( [sid] => 178065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where do we belong? [time] => 2014-03-30 13:47:57 [hometext] => I hope that you guys like this. I see so many people in our worl that have so much potential but are making bad choices and just want people to think about what they could be doing instead. So I wrote this just to see if I could give anyone inspiration.:) [bodytext] => I look around and see

People talking and laughing



Do they notice me watching

Admiring their confidence



She's with a group of people

And seem to be fitting in



But is this where she belongs



Her life is so confusing

Is this what she wants to do



They want to go and party

They say it tons of fun



I stand here and think

Is this who she really is



Does she want to throw her life away

Wasting all her time on this



She could be doing something else

Maybe with a purpose



There's so much more to this world

If only she would look



I start to think and question life

And who I want to be



Could I make a difference

If I helped even just one



I have a different feeling

Something I've never felt before



I'm not sure what it is



Is it confidence?

Or maybe just the feeling of a purpose



Whatever it is I am loving it

And think this is where I belong



I need to change my life

And am thankful to have found this out



And everyone who's reading this

I hope you know it's true



You can make a difference

No matter what's your age



I hope you all

Find where you belong
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 115 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Livingawkwardly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Where do we belong?

Contributed by Livingawkwardly on Sunday, 30th March 2014 @ 01:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



I look around and see

People talking and laughing



Do they notice me watching

Admiring their confidence



She's with a group of people

And seem to be fitting in



But is this where she belongs



Her life is so confusing

Is this what she wants to do



They want to go and party

They say it tons of fun



I stand here and think

Is this who she really is



Does she want to throw her life away

Wasting all her time on this



She could be doing something else

Maybe with a purpose



There's so much more to this world

If only she would look



I start to think and question life

And who I want to be



Could I make a difference

If I helped even just one



I have a different feeling

Something I've never felt before



I'm not sure what it is



Is it confidence?

Or maybe just the feeling of a purpose



Whatever it is I am loving it

And think this is where I belong



I need to change my life

And am thankful to have found this out



And everyone who's reading this

I hope you know it's true



You can make a difference

No matter what's your age



I hope you all

Find where you belong




Copyright © Livingawkwardly ... [ 2014-03-30 13:47:57]
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Re: Where do we belong? (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 31st March 2014 @ 08:19:39 AM AEST
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I applaud your motives. Your poem is good, but the topic is Great. I hope you stick with the same theme and write more on this. Maybe use an example, looking on a person NOW and what they COULD have been if they had not gone down a certain path or chosen a certain person to be with, poor decisions etc.


Re: Where do we belong? (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobJowers on Tuesday, 1st April 2014 @ 04:07:07 PM AEST
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Love it!
I can't really find anything negative to say, so instead I'll give thanks for making my day.




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