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Array ( [sid] => 178056 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Faith Denied [time] => 2014-03-29 22:09:52 [hometext] => Just another perspective [bodytext] => If hes not here then where,
Following the false lights glare,
Giving my heart to the man in the sky,
The simplest question is why,
Like wishing for something from a falling star,
Unconditional love is just so far,
They preach your words to every soul,
Just what is your goal,
They tell me that you are kind and fair,
Too bad that you are not really there. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Senates [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Faith Denied

Contributed by Senates on Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 10:09:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If hes not here then where,
Following the false lights glare,
Giving my heart to the man in the sky,
The simplest question is why,
Like wishing for something from a falling star,
Unconditional love is just so far,
They preach your words to every soul,
Just what is your goal,
They tell me that you are kind and fair,
Too bad that you are not really there.

Copyright © Senates ... [ 2014-03-29 22:09:52]
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Re: Faith Denied (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 10:19:42 PM AEST
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just as far as one reaches... this is quite
perfectly said! Hush, there's another perspective,
maybe another, and yet another... all in the one only world we ever could call home, have to actually, it's not like one has a choice, or do they? I wouldn't wish for a bunch of virgins in heaven, that kind of porno would soon get old.
As a man, I have learned, that the female human is by far the better of the two sexes.
they put words in the mouth of god, or the gods, or the spirits of all living life if you will.
unconditional love, this one should have certain constraints place upon it, if it is truly to do any good/ but only when one knows this to be true in any end.
Fabulous piece! Keep it up!

Peace!

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