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Array ( [sid] => 178051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In A Zoo.... [time] => 2014-03-29 02:37:24 [hometext] => This was written for someone I imagined to be a very close friend, however I just got tired of his selfish ways! [bodytext] => 15:01:2012....

It's time, this will impress some of you.
Yes and offend most of you.
Quite frankly I don't give a *****.
No I don't care one bit.
Don't give me that bloody stare.
Let me tell you yes pull up a chair.
How dare you treat people like, like!
Who are you to take away their bliss.
Bloody hell pull your socks.
Yes it's time to take stock.
Evaluate what you've done.
Cause for others it was not fun!
Just remember the wheel of life turns.
Continue like his you will burn!
Here take the shoe.
Come on please do.
So how does that feel?
It's not nice to get a raw deal.
You were raised better.
Pay attention to every last letter.
Yes from A to Z.
Get it in your head.
You can't walk around.
Bringing others down.
Hey straighten that pace!
This here is a disgrace.
I'm truly ashamed to be associated with you.
I would find better company in a zoo.
Go think about what you've done.
And when you've made peace come!
Come apologise to everyone.
Say sorry for all you've done.

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In A Zoo....

Contributed by RussellReinhardt on Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 02:37:24 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

15:01:2012....

It's time, this will impress some of you.
Yes and offend most of you.
Quite frankly I don't give a *****.
No I don't care one bit.
Don't give me that bloody stare.
Let me tell you yes pull up a chair.
How dare you treat people like, like!
Who are you to take away their bliss.
Bloody hell pull your socks.
Yes it's time to take stock.
Evaluate what you've done.
Cause for others it was not fun!
Just remember the wheel of life turns.
Continue like his you will burn!
Here take the shoe.
Come on please do.
So how does that feel?
It's not nice to get a raw deal.
You were raised better.
Pay attention to every last letter.
Yes from A to Z.
Get it in your head.
You can't walk around.
Bringing others down.
Hey straighten that pace!
This here is a disgrace.
I'm truly ashamed to be associated with you.
I would find better company in a zoo.
Go think about what you've done.
And when you've made peace come!
Come apologise to everyone.
Say sorry for all you've done.

RR

Copyright © RussellReinhardt ... [ 2014-03-29 02:37:24]
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Re: In A Zoo.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 10:51:45 PM AEST
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a tough piece to ignore. there's judgmental and then there can be earnestly something quite different afoot. what lofty goals does someone have, when they themselves turn their back on others in need, or worse...
people certainly can be forgiven, in retrospect there where times in my own self, it was me,
who had to ask to be, and no one else.
anyway, that's what friends are for, even if they aren't your friend, you got to say your peace.

I know RR that you're a good man, so I hope the best for your once good friend. harsh as this is, we need to write stuff down sometimes. I think we all should.
one thing about this, you never said who what or where or how. yet it states your reason for dismissal. Best always man!

Peace!

Re: In A Zoo.... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 03:06:27 PM AEST
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i'm thinking he got the point, i giggled when you
told him to pull his socks up tho lol,
hugs n' love nessa

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