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Array ( [sid] => 177981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thaw [time] => 2014-03-21 10:02:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It’s silent
I prefer that
Just me and my thoughts
Water under a frozen river
Yes, still flowing under the ice

It’s nice
Being alone
Just me and my book
Why can’t they understand that
No, I’m not lonely

It’s therapeutic
Drawing inward
Really, I enjoy this
I don’t think I want to go
Ok, just keep me below freezing

It’s warm
Going out
Standing in the room
Who is that over there
No, just wondering

It’s melting
My ice
A crack has formed
It’s kind of nice but I’m
Well, a bit scared

It’s frozen
Back to normal
He wants me to go again
I’m busy freezing though
Wait, she will be there




It’s warm again
Going in
Walking through in the room
Is that her over there
Yes, I’m warm enough now



It’s uncomfortable
Being this warm
But I can do it
She’s melting me
Well, it’s kind of noisy

It’s too warm
Alone together
It’s all new to me
We are breathing as one
Uh, the water is showing

Cracks form
Water shows
A dam is breaking
I am a flowing river
I’m warm

It’s quiet
I prefer this
Just me and my thoughts
Water in a visible river
Yes, still flowing after the ice

You can always flow
Don’t mind the ice [comments] => 2 [counter] => 94 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Metalman173 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Thaw

Contributed by Metalman173 on Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 10:02:58 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



It’s silent
I prefer that
Just me and my thoughts
Water under a frozen river
Yes, still flowing under the ice

It’s nice
Being alone
Just me and my book
Why can’t they understand that
No, I’m not lonely

It’s therapeutic
Drawing inward
Really, I enjoy this
I don’t think I want to go
Ok, just keep me below freezing

It’s warm
Going out
Standing in the room
Who is that over there
No, just wondering

It’s melting
My ice
A crack has formed
It’s kind of nice but I’m
Well, a bit scared

It’s frozen
Back to normal
He wants me to go again
I’m busy freezing though
Wait, she will be there




It’s warm again
Going in
Walking through in the room
Is that her over there
Yes, I’m warm enough now



It’s uncomfortable
Being this warm
But I can do it
She’s melting me
Well, it’s kind of noisy

It’s too warm
Alone together
It’s all new to me
We are breathing as one
Uh, the water is showing

Cracks form
Water shows
A dam is breaking
I am a flowing river
I’m warm

It’s quiet
I prefer this
Just me and my thoughts
Water in a visible river
Yes, still flowing after the ice

You can always flow
Don’t mind the ice




Copyright © Metalman173 ... [ 2014-03-21 10:02:58]
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Re: Thaw (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 04:57:33 PM AEST
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VERY well done. Draws you in.....good ending...I like this quite alot!


Re: Thaw (User Rating: 1 )
by Apollonia on Sunday, 30th March 2014 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST
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Amazing I can almost hear the sounds of the crackling ice and the flowing water and feel that special love very catchy




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