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Array ( [sid] => 177963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Earth is Crying [time] => 2014-03-19 16:37:35 [hometext] => Wrote this when i was feeling down one day [bodytext] => I look around
The sun is gone
The sky is black

I don't see rain
I don't hear thunder
I feel sadness and anger

I sit here and listen
Quietness overcomes
Then boom

It has started
I hear the thunder
I sense the pain

I feel...
The clouds crying
Seeming so sad

I hear...
the earth roaring
Sounding so angry

I see...
The sky flashing
Breaking apart

And I realize
The earth is crying
and I am not alone [comments] => 4 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Livingawkwardly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

The Earth is Crying

Contributed by Livingawkwardly on Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 04:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I look around
The sun is gone
The sky is black

I don't see rain
I don't hear thunder
I feel sadness and anger

I sit here and listen
Quietness overcomes
Then boom

It has started
I hear the thunder
I sense the pain

I feel...
The clouds crying
Seeming so sad

I hear...
the earth roaring
Sounding so angry

I see...
The sky flashing
Breaking apart

And I realize
The earth is crying
and I am not alone

Copyright © Livingawkwardly ... [ 2014-03-19 16:37:35]
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Re: The Earth is Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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Very sad. I am not exactly sure if I understand this entirely but I do know that we must take care of our planet or it will surely revolt against us.

Nice job on this.

Welcome to YPDC and keep writing.

Tim

Re: The Earth is Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by twitterbird on Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 09:23:49 PM AEST
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I get it, it's beautiful. Thanks for sharing :) you aren't alone.

Re: The Earth is Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 12:27:43 PM AEST
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Help me if I'm wrong I don't think this one is quite about the earth. Its more like likening ones inner being to the earth and nature, when storms are raging around. So to do we suddenly awaken to storms in our life. Just like grass in the wing we bend and bow to the storms and other times like trees we stand strong against them. Good write

Greetings
Rus

Re: The Earth is Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 10:00:29 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful.....

hugs n' love nessa

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