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Array ( [sid] => 177929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Peace in the Valley~ [time] => 2014-03-11 13:37:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There is peace in the valley
where the wild meadow grasses grow.
On summer breeze the scent
of the wild yellow rose.

On yon mountains grow
the tall lofty pine
the sigh of the wind whispering
a song soft and divine.

Glint of the sun
dances soft in the tree's
Aspen leaves wave
to the Fawn, unnatural eyes cannot see.

Canyon Creek bubbles
dainty,over the rocks
little Brook Trout giggles
for they were not caught.

All of these things
remind me of you
the sun setting low
over the "Sunny Dell"

Smell of the earth
and wild Alfalfa blooms
all of these things
such a part of you.

Love you dad. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

~Peace in the Valley~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 11th March 2014 @ 01:37:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

There is peace in the valley
where the wild meadow grasses grow.
On summer breeze the scent
of the wild yellow rose.

On yon mountains grow
the tall lofty pine
the sigh of the wind whispering
a song soft and divine.

Glint of the sun
dances soft in the tree's
Aspen leaves wave
to the Fawn, unnatural eyes cannot see.

Canyon Creek bubbles
dainty,over the rocks
little Brook Trout giggles
for they were not caught.

All of these things
remind me of you
the sun setting low
over the "Sunny Dell"

Smell of the earth
and wild Alfalfa blooms
all of these things
such a part of you.

Love you dad.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2014-03-11 13:37:02]
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Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th March 2014 @ 02:17:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful, Michelle, very beautiful. Like a whisper in the wind. Hope he gets to see it.

[www.sherv.net]

Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 11th March 2014 @ 07:46:29 PM AEST
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Sounds like paradise. What beautiful memories of your Dad everywhere.

~Scorp

Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 13th March 2014 @ 11:28:38 PM AEST
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soft sweet and so beautiful my friend

Shari

Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Voices-Ghost on Friday, 14th March 2014 @ 08:54:55 PM AEST
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Such beautiful thoughts and memories Shelby. Every breath, every sight keeps memories alive in your heart and your soul. Wonderfully expressed write.

Voices-Ghost

Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 12:35:54 AM AEST
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truly sweet and beautiful,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 08:12:46 PM AEST
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I can see this...my mind shows the bit of rock peeking from the grass, allows me to smell the pine laden breeze, permits the sound of the bubbling stream..all because of the imagery that your lovely poem creates.
Thank you. And thanks for sharing!

Re: ~Peace in the Valley~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd May 2014 @ 09:37:28 PM AEST
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Ummm yeah.... I miss my dad too. You hit a spot.

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