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Array ( [sid] => 177809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => These wind's were too harsh for the hopeful [time] => 2014-02-20 01:32:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => And I know that you like me today
Your seems weren’t stitched anyway
You fell apart at the scene
A sour sip from my lush lips
So please go back….
Before blood cells pixelate and leave
Your body and create this theme
A motion picture so saddening
And I know that you like me today
You just weren’t right anyway
You try to plug your heart’s bleeding
My eye’s set to achieve this feeling
So I could knock you out with a feather
As I grip you so vastly
As I spin you so hastily

You....

The wind whipped girl who never knew
To trust a lion is to trust a mew
You cried wolf, disintegration view
Of the crumbling girl who never knew
What it was like to be nothing…
But a use




jcfor3ver, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.

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These wind's were too harsh for the hopeful

Contributed by jcfor3ver on Thursday, 20th February 2014 @ 01:32:07 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



And I know that you like me today
Your seems weren’t stitched anyway
You fell apart at the scene
A sour sip from my lush lips
So please go back….
Before blood cells pixelate and leave
Your body and create this theme
A motion picture so saddening
And I know that you like me today
You just weren’t right anyway
You try to plug your heart’s bleeding
My eye’s set to achieve this feeling
So I could knock you out with a feather
As I grip you so vastly
As I spin you so hastily

You....

The wind whipped girl who never knew
To trust a lion is to trust a mew
You cried wolf, disintegration view
Of the crumbling girl who never knew
What it was like to be nothing…
But a use




jcfor3ver, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.





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