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On my face it is showing
I clinch my fists
Man I'm really *****

***** that things aren't working
My body uncontrollably shaking
I scream at no one
My mental sanity is done

I throw punch after punch
On the impact my bones crunch
I scream again
This battle I cannot win

My brain feels like it is about to explode
I can't break this mental code
This rage I cannot suppress
My self control becoming less and less

I start to run down an endless road
Trying to break this rage mode
I trip and fall
Now I've lost it all

My mind goes blank
Now I'm done for
I tried to control it
But I couldn't

I feel the hair start to grow
And my hands start to heal
While other bones break
Tendons rip apart then seal

Now I'm a beast of the night
Ready to fight and kill
I've lost all my will
Self control I have no more [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 42 [informant] => TheTimmy56666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mythology )

The Turning

Contributed by TheTimmy56666 on Tuesday, 18th February 2014 @ 07:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology

My rage is growing
On my face it is showing
I clinch my fists
Man I'm really *****

***** that things aren't working
My body uncontrollably shaking
I scream at no one
My mental sanity is done

I throw punch after punch
On the impact my bones crunch
I scream again
This battle I cannot win

My brain feels like it is about to explode
I can't break this mental code
This rage I cannot suppress
My self control becoming less and less

I start to run down an endless road
Trying to break this rage mode
I trip and fall
Now I've lost it all

My mind goes blank
Now I'm done for
I tried to control it
But I couldn't

I feel the hair start to grow
And my hands start to heal
While other bones break
Tendons rip apart then seal

Now I'm a beast of the night
Ready to fight and kill
I've lost all my will
Self control I have no more

Copyright Â© TheTimmy56666 ... [ 2014-02-18 19:04:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Turning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:00:06 PM AEST
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Self-indulgent. Try to think how you might feel this way, and why it might be you and not others.

Re: The Turning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:33:19 PM AEST
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AnotherRed... once again your comment is utterly useless :-) as TylerSpeaks said, it really does come off as insecure. If you're having a bad day, maybe you should vent in a poem instead of in the comments..... I liked this poem by the way, thanks for sharing

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