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Array ( [sid] => 177793 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fanatic Envy [time] => 2014-02-17 02:04:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => O happy, confident, charming, handsome man.

So magnetic is your presence. So seductive

is your gaze. People flock to you and throw

upon your alter all of their love. I hate

you. I hate you because you have never had

to suffer. Suffering is as alien to you as

your happiness is to me. Your fortune

permeates out of you the same way my misery

oozes out of me. Man of beauty and talent,

what kind of devilish God has deemed it

necessary to taunt me with your grace? I

hate you, and spit on your benevolent

visage. You and your followers gaze upon me

like an unholy monstrosity, like some

abominable thing that is entirely beneath

you. You shun me for being a broken human

being. Why has fortune favored you, and not

me? O happy and joyous man! Hear me! I

want to see you shattered! I want to stand

on all of your broken dreams. I want to see

your God forsake you, and your followers

turn and devour you! O shining beacon of a

man, I want you to know what it is like to

be me! You should know what it feels like

to have your candle snuffed out over and

over again. I want to see you suffer until

all you know is darkness, and can no longer

comprehind what it means to shine! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Sirath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Fanatic Envy

Contributed by Sirath on Monday, 17th February 2014 @ 02:04:42 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



O happy, confident, charming, handsome man.

So magnetic is your presence. So seductive

is your gaze. People flock to you and throw

upon your alter all of their love. I hate

you. I hate you because you have never had

to suffer. Suffering is as alien to you as

your happiness is to me. Your fortune

permeates out of you the same way my misery

oozes out of me. Man of beauty and talent,

what kind of devilish God has deemed it

necessary to taunt me with your grace? I

hate you, and spit on your benevolent

visage. You and your followers gaze upon me

like an unholy monstrosity, like some

abominable thing that is entirely beneath

you. You shun me for being a broken human

being. Why has fortune favored you, and not

me? O happy and joyous man! Hear me! I

want to see you shattered! I want to stand

on all of your broken dreams. I want to see

your God forsake you, and your followers

turn and devour you! O shining beacon of a

man, I want you to know what it is like to

be me! You should know what it feels like

to have your candle snuffed out over and

over again. I want to see you suffer until

all you know is darkness, and can no longer

comprehind what it means to shine!




Copyright © Sirath ... [ 2014-02-17 02:04:42]
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Re: Fanatic Envy (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 17th February 2014 @ 10:43:46 AM AEST
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Good release of emotional torture.....



Re: Fanatic Envy (User Rating: 1 )
by Voices-Ghost on Tuesday, 18th February 2014 @ 08:11:58 PM AEST
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Powerful vent of life's frustration.
Better to let it out and face the world fresh again.

Voices-Ghost


Re: Fanatic Envy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:45:28 PM AEST
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So powerful in the reading. A touch of 'so eff you, Mr, how's about me' Many will relate, but the you that is you, is more important than the he that is him. Trust me.




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