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Nobody notices the captain going down with his ship that's just nearly afloat.
Behind these eyes lies terrors and the truth.
Such precious things only once saw innocence
Now the only thing in sight is misery.
Tears flow like waterfalls spilling into a bay
and my eyebrows are always arched like they are about to cave.
For I miss the once view that they use to hold
It's a shame now a days I just wish I could see no more. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 104 [topic] => 21 [informant] => MeganIsMe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Blue Sights

Contributed by MeganIsMe on Thursday, 13th February 2014 @ 01:09:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Even though my eyes are like a beautiful blue crystal sea
Nobody notices the captain going down with his ship that's just nearly afloat.
Behind these eyes lies terrors and the truth.
Such precious things only once saw innocence
Now the only thing in sight is misery.
Tears flow like waterfalls spilling into a bay
and my eyebrows are always arched like they are about to cave.
For I miss the once view that they use to hold
It's a shame now a days I just wish I could see no more.

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Re: Blue Sights (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 13th February 2014 @ 09:41:56 PM AEST
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None of us are professionals! We all write hoping that others will read and comment and enjoy.
Your poem is very sad. Glad it makes you feel better to write! I hope you write a lot of poems here. A perfect life is very rare, and it helps to be able to recall our innocence as you have!
softerware

Re: Blue Sights (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th February 2014 @ 12:07:04 AM AEST
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Like softerware says, no one here is a professional...well, except me of course. ;-) Just kidding!!!

I think this is very sad but you make some very beautiful metaphors. Keep writing and photo 1036153111_gif.gif

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Tim

Re: Blue Sights (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 14th February 2014 @ 03:42:36 AM AEST
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Careful Tim I want tell every one that I think u r a genius.

Now to the poem, by all means keep writing. You have just stumbled in to a God given natural talent.
Just keep picking up your pen or key board.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Blue Sights (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 06:49:43 PM AEST
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I have to echo the comments made by everyone else.
Which of us here is a professional. We are all bound by the desire to offer our thoughts, our dreams, our wishes and a little piece of our soul to the world.
In this you have done that.

Steve

Re: Blue Sights (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 10:45:01 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings,

hugs n' love nessa

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