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Array ( [sid] => 177757 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SET FREE [time] => 2014-02-10 13:25:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why won’t she let herself be happy?
Why is she standing in her own way?

Why does she not believe you?
Why can she not trust your words?

She is afraid to get attached or comfortable.
She doesn’t want this to be taken away.

Someone else has taken the spotlight.
Someone else has interfered.

Constant worry has taken peace away from today.
She finds it hard to trust because she has been let down before.

She builds walls, one brick at a time.
She cares too much.
She gives too much.
She helps too much.

She can be so much more.
She can be all that she has dreamed.
She can be all you need her to be.
She is finding who she has been searching for.

We must build trust or this won’t work.
We must communicate when things get tough.

We have to be honest.
We have to heal & get everything out.

She needs you to believe in her, trust her, be honest with her, be her friend & most importantly care about her.

What you do is hurting her when you show you don’t care.
She needs assurance from you.
She needs you to prove yourself as she proves herself.

You must let go of the person standing in the way.
And she must let go of the insecurities.

Letting go is beautiful freedom.
Release the chains that have been holding us down.
Set us free so we may soar.


SMH 1/29/14
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SET FREE

Contributed by Sammarie307 on Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 01:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Why won’t she let herself be happy?
Why is she standing in her own way?

Why does she not believe you?
Why can she not trust your words?

She is afraid to get attached or comfortable.
She doesn’t want this to be taken away.

Someone else has taken the spotlight.
Someone else has interfered.

Constant worry has taken peace away from today.
She finds it hard to trust because she has been let down before.

She builds walls, one brick at a time.
She cares too much.
She gives too much.
She helps too much.

She can be so much more.
She can be all that she has dreamed.
She can be all you need her to be.
She is finding who she has been searching for.

We must build trust or this won’t work.
We must communicate when things get tough.

We have to be honest.
We have to heal & get everything out.

She needs you to believe in her, trust her, be honest with her, be her friend & most importantly care about her.

What you do is hurting her when you show you don’t care.
She needs assurance from you.
She needs you to prove yourself as she proves herself.

You must let go of the person standing in the way.
And she must let go of the insecurities.

Letting go is beautiful freedom.
Release the chains that have been holding us down.
Set us free so we may soar.


SMH 1/29/14




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Re: SET FREE (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 06:56:09 PM AEST
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This deep Innervision is a good release of emotional torture and written beautifully.


Re: SET FREE (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 07:18:46 PM AEST
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Beautifully written... These words have a huge impact on me. It's word for word like a situation I'm going through at this moment in life and you penned it so elegantly... Great job!!

Sometimes it's easier to know what must be done, than actually being able to do accomplish it...


Re: SET FREE (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 12th February 2014 @ 09:45:04 AM AEST
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"Letting go is beautiful freedom." That line says it all! I was a victim of this sort of bondage and am so happy that pure trust--both in God and my boyfriend--has conquered it all. Finding the right person is step 1; keeping the faith in that person is the next step. Take care and God bless,

Deidra


Re: SET FREE (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 14th February 2014 @ 01:22:39 PM AEST
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simply beautiful!!!x


Re: SET FREE (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 06:24:47 PM AEST
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Those people who never have a care, never have a doubt and have no fears about the world are truly blessed.
The rest, like us, find barriers to put in our own way.
You've reminded me that thinking positive and being positive are not necessarily the same thing.

Steve




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