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or they just pages of sheer coincidence
that in spite of so many people
and in spite of life being so dense
no matter which day
no matter how usual and mundane the 24 hours sway
you and me always cross our way........! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 104 [topic] => 2 [informant] => whiteplacid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Pleasant moments

Contributed by whiteplacid on Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 10:02:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

are these moments indicating my luck
or they just pages of sheer coincidence
that in spite of so many people
and in spite of life being so dense
no matter which day
no matter how usual and mundane the 24 hours sway
you and me always cross our way........!

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Re: Pleasant moments (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 01:01:54 AM AEST
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You have uncomplicated the goings on around you to notice that you cross paths! A nice reminder for all of us to pay attention to what matters!!
May I offer a comment Whiteplacid? when I need to decide whether to say "you and I" or "you and me"..I break the sentence into two sentences. "You and me always cross our way" becomes "You always cross our way" and "Me always cross our way." It makes it easier to see that the sentence should read " You and I always cross our way"…(Hope you can use this little trick to help with a confusing quirk of
grammar!!) Best wishes…softerware

Re: Pleasant moments (User Rating: 1 )
by WhitePlacid on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 09:26:27 AM AEST
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@softerware...Thanks for stopping by!. Thanks for taking time to write out and also for the suggestion.
Poems for me a mode of a quick expression of the moment, more like a doodle....not looking for right or wrong!!!:-) :-)
I generally do not aim at being grammatical correct as my intent is on vibe of the poem and not the words.Nevertheless, if I ever wish to be grammatically right, I will certainly give it a thought. :-):-)

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Whiteplacid:-D

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