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Those of knowledge,
They wash up on the shores of humanity,
Only to be revived,
Void of the gifts that are ignorance and knowledge,
Knowing nothing yet,
Knowing everything,
Living for the questions,
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Trivial

Contributed by senates on Friday, 7th February 2014 @ 09:59:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Those of ignorance,
Those of knowledge,
They wash up on the shores of humanity,
Only to be revived,
Void of the gifts that are ignorance and knowledge,
Knowing nothing yet,
Knowing everything,
Living for the questions,
Dying for the answers.

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Re: Trivial (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th February 2014 @ 11:49:48 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I especially like this line:

They wash up on the shores of humanity

Very good job...especially for a first poem!

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Re: Trivial (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 01:32:57 AM AEST
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Your first poem? Really?
I wouldn't have thought so…
Love the conclusion:
Living for the questions, dying for the answers!
I especially like that you have given us the recipe but left us to draw our own conclusions!
that is very flattering to your reader! And endearing!
Well done…hope you keep writing!
PS: I didn't know this when I started here, but it is a courtesy to (1) thank those who will comment on your work, and (2) contribute by reading and commenting on others poems.
Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: Trivial (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 01:37:40 AM AEST
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One last thought…
you have no reason to apologize for your work.
You become your self-image.
Make it worthwhile!
No excuses…you are splendid!
softerware

Re: Trivial (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 04:36:50 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC
Really good writing.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Trivial (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 04:14:18 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. You have the raw, natural talant for poetry. You either got it or don't and you do.
Blessings, huggs, smiles,
emy

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Re: Trivial (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 02:08:40 AM AEST
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'Living for the questions,
Dying for the answers."
those two lines
so true
so powerful...

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