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Wave of bliss.
Contributed by
JimKoz
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Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 11:43:38 PM in AEST
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It’s like I’m riding along with this blissful wave of energy,
But hiding amongst it comes short bursts of chaos,
Which temporarily throws me off,
But I continue pushing and fighting through to ride that wave of bliss.
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Re: Wave of bliss.
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 28th January 2014 @ 02:18:17 AM AEST (User
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We are definately bliss driven! the happiness hunt is universal. Wall Street is counting on it!
You made the equation amazingly simple.
softerware
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Re: Wave of bliss.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Sunday, 2nd February 2014 @ 06:15:27 PM AEST (User
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this is so light and inspirational, lovely! |
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Re: Wave of bliss.
(User Rating: 1 ) by WhitePlacid on
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Keep riding them!:-) |
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Re: Wave of bliss.
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamPoetess on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 01:28:56 PM AEST (User
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Wave of Bliss ... comment by DreamPoetess (Meagan)
See the universe as it is, chaos has no space in you; it is a situation, out there, not in you. Feel the energy inside as you ride. Stay focused Jim, you are a part of the universe, and it is a part of you. No need to push or fight the moment; breathe, relax inside and become alive.
Your poem...full of feelings. |
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