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Array ( [sid] => 177669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bruised [time] => 2014-01-27 03:11:39 [hometext] => Do you ever feel stupid for opening up your heart? I know I do [bodytext] => I am feeling kind of stupid as I lay upon my bed
I wonder what Im thinking here inside my muddled head

I need to pull my head in now and never speak my mind
I beat myself continuously and treat myself unkind

Everymtime I fail me and my immature heart
When I open up the padlocks and pull the chains apart

I need to build a prison now to keep my heart intact
And never leave open to an unprovoked attack

So please dont tell me stories of the things that are not true
Id rather hear the truth instead of lies that make me blue

So keep your insincerity away from my bruised heart
Ive had enough of brokenness thats tore my soul apart

If you wish to play my feelings to keep yourself amused
Id rather you just walked away then leave me so confused

Perhaps I have been shattered more to ever trust again
coz when I start to trust you all I ever get is pain

I fail at love I fail at life I really am a mess
And being played emotionally just makes me fail the test

So just be honest, just be true for one time in your life
And let my heart forget you once you remove your knife.

My destiny is clear now as I try to find some rest
my dating days are over now I think that this is best.







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Bruised

Contributed by thistle_and_fern on Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 03:11:39 AM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



I am feeling kind of stupid as I lay upon my bed
I wonder what Im thinking here inside my muddled head

I need to pull my head in now and never speak my mind
I beat myself continuously and treat myself unkind

Everymtime I fail me and my immature heart
When I open up the padlocks and pull the chains apart

I need to build a prison now to keep my heart intact
And never leave open to an unprovoked attack

So please dont tell me stories of the things that are not true
Id rather hear the truth instead of lies that make me blue

So keep your insincerity away from my bruised heart
Ive had enough of brokenness thats tore my soul apart

If you wish to play my feelings to keep yourself amused
Id rather you just walked away then leave me so confused

Perhaps I have been shattered more to ever trust again
coz when I start to trust you all I ever get is pain

I fail at love I fail at life I really am a mess
And being played emotionally just makes me fail the test

So just be honest, just be true for one time in your life
And let my heart forget you once you remove your knife.

My destiny is clear now as I try to find some rest
my dating days are over now I think that this is best.











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Re: Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th January 2014 @ 12:51:07 AM AEST
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In answer to you question, yes!

A very sad poem but don't beat yourself up and never give up. (I know, unsolicited advice). It's just that not everyone is the same.

Best regards,

Tim


Re: Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by Blackheart on Friday, 31st January 2014 @ 11:48:06 AM AEST
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Amazing how I can say the same thing about myself, you pretty much spoke for me with this poem! Beautifully written too, thank you for this poem


Re: Bruised (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 05:21:04 PM AEST
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this is sad but so beautifully written, you have
taken your pain and made the most exquisite
poem,

hugs n' love nessa




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