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Array ( [sid] => 177604 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Imperfect [time] => 2014-01-15 21:38:19 [hometext] => I wanted her too feel the same [bodytext] => I am not perfect
I am full of flaw
I am amazed by your beauty that leaves me in awe
I am afraid to fall
I will rise and become your everything and you my all
I will always answer
I will always remember
Hopefully we can build to that can not falter or stall
Countless renditions
Too so many premonitions
That shows us multiple visions
Of what we could be
I hope you can believe and see
That through these layers of faults
I am trying to be a better me
I ask you not to fear
Let me near, let me whisper soft words of beautiful things into your ear,
I can't masquerade and pretend to be something I'm not,
I'm neither cold or hot,
A constant warm
Looking for the calm to my storm
I find you to be my answer
The key,
Forged through the paths that we've taken,
Eyes open; standing here awakened
By the passion that my heart desires for you
I cry and it's hard for me to admit
I won't give up
I refuse to quit
I believe you were set in my path for a reason
To show you me that life does exists
I miss you
I want to hold you, feel your warmth
The soft feel of your sensual kiss
I am full of flaw
And I am not perfect
But what I think what we can become.
I can not, will not neglect
I will show you I am everything you think I can be and become
This nervousness,
Me wanting and to know you
My work will never be done.
I will show you
That you are my world
You alone;
Not another soul,
No one.





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Imperfect

Contributed by desciple on Wednesday, 15th January 2014 @ 09:38:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I am not perfect
I am full of flaw
I am amazed by your beauty that leaves me in awe
I am afraid to fall
I will rise and become your everything and you my all
I will always answer
I will always remember
Hopefully we can build to that can not falter or stall
Countless renditions
Too so many premonitions
That shows us multiple visions
Of what we could be
I hope you can believe and see
That through these layers of faults
I am trying to be a better me
I ask you not to fear
Let me near, let me whisper soft words of beautiful things into your ear,
I can't masquerade and pretend to be something I'm not,
I'm neither cold or hot,
A constant warm
Looking for the calm to my storm
I find you to be my answer
The key,
Forged through the paths that we've taken,
Eyes open; standing here awakened
By the passion that my heart desires for you
I cry and it's hard for me to admit
I won't give up
I refuse to quit
I believe you were set in my path for a reason
To show you me that life does exists
I miss you
I want to hold you, feel your warmth
The soft feel of your sensual kiss
I am full of flaw
And I am not perfect
But what I think what we can become.
I can not, will not neglect
I will show you I am everything you think I can be and become
This nervousness,
Me wanting and to know you
My work will never be done.
I will show you
That you are my world
You alone;
Not another soul,
No one.









Copyright © desciple ... [ 2014-01-15 21:38:19]
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Re: Imperfect (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th January 2014 @ 09:44:57 PM AEST
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Another very beautiful write.
Smiles, Blessings,
emy


Re: Imperfect (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Wednesday, 15th January 2014 @ 09:46:48 PM AEST
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All I can say is well done and pen on! Just had a fight with my girlfriend tonight and this fit the bill to a "T", thanks for sharing.


Re: Imperfect (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 16th January 2014 @ 09:54:58 PM AEST
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An honest and heartfelt poem, love it.

Michelle


Re: Imperfect (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:30:53 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings,

hugs n' love nessa




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