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Array ( [sid] => 17758 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Monster [time] => 2003-05-18 12:05:00 [hometext] => I just wrote this, at about 11 so tell me what you think! I kinda like it myself but that's becausei wrote it, it probably sux to everyone else, lol. [bodytext] => Darkness creeps upon me
The hairs on my neck start to rise
I start to walk a little faster
Behind me I hear the wind’s cries

I hear a whisper in my ear
I spin to see no one there
I start to sprint faster
Looking for help anywhere.

The grass gets slippery beneath my feet
The blinding fog starts to set in
I hear footsteps stalking me
I hear the wind’s cry once again

A skulking shadow right beyond my view
I can feel it watching me
It’s there whichever way I turn
I can barely see it’s outline,
I can hear it hollowly breathe

The disturbing quiet around me
Finally gets inside my head
The tears start streaming down my face
Knowing in an hour I’ll be dead.

I scream out loud, what do you want!
And I fall to my knees on the ground
Grabbing my head I cannot block out
That horrible silence, that horrible sound.

As I cower it will stand there forever
Inside my head, just out of reach
If I try to stand and fight
Will the nightmare just cease?

So with insanity as my only alternative
I stand and stifle my cries
I cannot cower and go crazy
For then I surely will die.

And so I stand and face up
Where I see bloody claws and teeth
My last shriek was never heard
As the monster tore into me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => BlackFire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Monster

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Darkness creeps upon me
The hairs on my neck start to rise
I start to walk a little faster
Behind me I hear the wind’s cries

I hear a whisper in my ear
I spin to see no one there
I start to sprint faster
Looking for help anywhere.

The grass gets slippery beneath my feet
The blinding fog starts to set in
I hear footsteps stalking me
I hear the wind’s cry once again

A skulking shadow right beyond my view
I can feel it watching me
It’s there whichever way I turn
I can barely see it’s outline,
I can hear it hollowly breathe

The disturbing quiet around me
Finally gets inside my head
The tears start streaming down my face
Knowing in an hour I’ll be dead.

I scream out loud, what do you want!
And I fall to my knees on the ground
Grabbing my head I cannot block out
That horrible silence, that horrible sound.

As I cower it will stand there forever
Inside my head, just out of reach
If I try to stand and fight
Will the nightmare just cease?

So with insanity as my only alternative
I stand and stifle my cries
I cannot cower and go crazy
For then I surely will die.

And so I stand and face up
Where I see bloody claws and teeth
My last shriek was never heard
As the monster tore into me.




Copyright © BlackFire9786 ... [ 2003-05-18 12:05:00]
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Re: Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:13:51 AM AEST
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wow this truely is a strong poem, your an excellent writer, i'm off to read more of yours!


Re: Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by SugimotoYouki on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:17:59 AM AEST
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Dark, morbid, powerful...
just how I love poetry
great work...
I hope the rest of yours is just as good ;)




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