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is paper thin

it's trees
dissolved

shadows of old
cherished forests

letters
as abstractions

an un-poem
beating.

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word banging

Contributed by ming on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 06:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

the fabric
is paper thin

it's trees
dissolved

shadows of old
cherished forests

letters
as abstractions

an un-poem
beating.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2013-12-31 18:13:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: word banging (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 09:16:54 PM AEST
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I found myself asking a question when I read this and that, to me, is poetry in action. Does the beating heart of the un-poem beating be creation about to happen? Thus creating a life of its own...

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Re: word banging (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 09:48:26 PM AEST
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Thought provoking and subtle. Nice.

Re: word banging (User Rating: 1 )
by saramic on Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 08:13:42 AM AEST
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very cleverly done - the way the poem lets images surface and submerge....the un-poem

Re: word banging (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 4th January 2014 @ 06:10:53 AM AEST
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An unpoem beating.....the beauty is in the simplicity and yet complete connection of understanding and not having a single worry of the effectiveness of the writing.All of this for me is a joy filled pleasure.

Re: word banging (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 12:01:53 AM AEST
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refreshingly beautiful,

hugs n' love nessa

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