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As we drive to meet your flight
Many thoughts cloud my brain
Thankful we get to begin again

Strain to see your smiling face
Running to lead the hugging race
In our arms, the years fall away
This hug is all we needed to say

Whatever the past held is gone
There is no more right or wrong
Two hearts meld to one bright light
The future ahead is shining bright

I know what the doctors told you
That there is not much left to do
But I know that God has given us
This time to spend in loving trust

Always know that I'm here forever
Supporting your every life endeavor
You've so much left to see and give
Your life is yours, so go and live

May your days be filled with wonder
May your nights be a peaceful slumber
May your soul know God's sweet touch
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This Hug

Contributed by dvtpdw on Monday, 30th December 2013 @ 05:30:30 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Watching the day turn to night
As we drive to meet your flight
Many thoughts cloud my brain
Thankful we get to begin again

Strain to see your smiling face
Running to lead the hugging race
In our arms, the years fall away
This hug is all we needed to say

Whatever the past held is gone
There is no more right or wrong
Two hearts meld to one bright light
The future ahead is shining bright

I know what the doctors told you
That there is not much left to do
But I know that God has given us
This time to spend in loving trust

Always know that I'm here forever
Supporting your every life endeavor
You've so much left to see and give
Your life is yours, so go and live

May your days be filled with wonder
May your nights be a peaceful slumber
May your soul know God's sweet touch
Always know, I love you very much

Copyright © dvtpdw ... [ 2013-12-30 17:30:30]
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Re: This Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by lisamary on Monday, 30th December 2013 @ 09:52:35 PM AEST
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Such beautiful writing x
Your brother must be proud to have a brother like you xx

Re: This Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 03:32:13 PM AEST
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Brought tears to my eyes reading this
Such a heartfelt poem

Re: This Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Saturday, 11th January 2014 @ 10:00:41 AM AEST
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What a wonderful poem, I loved every line
What a wonderful thoughtful and loving brother you are
Thanks so much for sharing

Re: This Hug (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 09:04:45 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful, blessings,

hugs n' love nessa

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