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Array ( [sid] => 177445 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time is frozen with the thoughts of you [time] => 2013-12-27 12:39:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

Snowflakes glistening on the cushioned banks around me,
Ice bound trees bend their weary branches over the well trodden paths.
The sound of silence overwhelms my soul and I fill the silence with thoughts of you.
I see your face in my mind as I wander down the sidewalk, no purpose to my steps.

I am going nowhere and will arrive in no time.
Wind whistles in my ears and I shiver in the cold
Time is frozen when I think of your smile
I feel your hand slip into mine and I turn towards where you should be.

But you aren’t there and my hand grasps the frigid space
I shudder and realize that I have stopped moving.
I begin again, a slow, jolted pace, trying to clear my head
But without you, I am empty, so thoughts of you keep slipping into my weary mind.

I am tired of resisting you, but I cannot move on with you consuming my every thought.
So again, and again I try to let the silence around me cleanse me of your presence.
But you are still there and again I realize I have stopped moving.
I lift my head and a spark is struck in my heart.

I will move on.
My steps find a purpose.
I look at where I am,
And I pick a place I want to be.

My heart groans with the memory of you.
But you are a memory and will not block my path.
I will put you behind me,
Nothing will keep me back.

I stumble and fall, Wearily lie on the stone cold ground, no warmth in sight.
Do I lie here? Or do I get up?
Thoughts of you are knocking on the doors of my mind.
Can I resist?

Can I find the strength to get up?
Memories of your voice, “If you can look up, you can get up.”
My face searches for a sky that I know should be there.
But it is dark and I can’t tell whether I am up or down.

A voice in my head chants “Don’t give up, Get up”
Over and Over and Over.
But it’s dull rhythm pounds on an unresponsive mind.
I am lost.

Will someone help me?
Help me to my feet?
Hold out their hand?
Lift me up?

As I lie here, On the cold weary ground. Thoughts of you seeping into my fragile, broken soul. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 111 [topic] => 22 [informant] => twitterbird [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Time is frozen with the thoughts of you

Contributed by twitterbird on Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 12:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove





Snowflakes glistening on the cushioned banks around me,
Ice bound trees bend their weary branches over the well trodden paths.
The sound of silence overwhelms my soul and I fill the silence with thoughts of you.
I see your face in my mind as I wander down the sidewalk, no purpose to my steps.

I am going nowhere and will arrive in no time.
Wind whistles in my ears and I shiver in the cold
Time is frozen when I think of your smile
I feel your hand slip into mine and I turn towards where you should be.

But you aren’t there and my hand grasps the frigid space
I shudder and realize that I have stopped moving.
I begin again, a slow, jolted pace, trying to clear my head
But without you, I am empty, so thoughts of you keep slipping into my weary mind.

I am tired of resisting you, but I cannot move on with you consuming my every thought.
So again, and again I try to let the silence around me cleanse me of your presence.
But you are still there and again I realize I have stopped moving.
I lift my head and a spark is struck in my heart.

I will move on.
My steps find a purpose.
I look at where I am,
And I pick a place I want to be.

My heart groans with the memory of you.
But you are a memory and will not block my path.
I will put you behind me,
Nothing will keep me back.

I stumble and fall, Wearily lie on the stone cold ground, no warmth in sight.
Do I lie here? Or do I get up?
Thoughts of you are knocking on the doors of my mind.
Can I resist?

Can I find the strength to get up?
Memories of your voice, “If you can look up, you can get up.”
My face searches for a sky that I know should be there.
But it is dark and I can’t tell whether I am up or down.

A voice in my head chants “Don’t give up, Get up”
Over and Over and Over.
But it’s dull rhythm pounds on an unresponsive mind.
I am lost.

Will someone help me?
Help me to my feet?
Hold out their hand?
Lift me up?

As I lie here, On the cold weary ground. Thoughts of you seeping into my fragile, broken soul.




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Re: Time is frozen with the thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 10:01:32 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful read. Tender and almost painful to experience. You describe dispair with a graceful soothing cadance. I can feel the rhythm of life slowing down as the story unfolds.
Thank you for sharing this.

softerware


Re: Time is frozen with the thoughts of you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 10:37:57 PM AEST
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Sad but awesome writing.
Blessings,
emy
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