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Array ( [sid] => 177413 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The first dream [time] => 2013-12-22 20:30:12 [hometext] => always, abraham [bodytext] => The first dream

I have seen so many beautiful things in my life.
I have seen a blanket of stars
The sky naked and shining
I have stood beneath a rain
Painful and unforgiving
I have climbed the peak of a valley
To see the sun set over its own shadow
I have seen light broken by water
The reflection of trees in the moonlight
Watching through the foggy banks
Of my home

I have witnessed the power of love
A winter night full of stars
Fields of grass and straw
A deep blue sky

I have given my soul to the thirst of my own desire
I have seen the rivers tumbling across smooth stone
The height of a fire spiraling into darkness
I have seen the mountains

I have had many dreams in my life
The letters in the maw
Of love and fantasy
The words that give me hope
The tragedy

I have longed for the rain
Stood in my own pain
I have feared

I do not know my first dream

The skies were always clear
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The first dream

Contributed by iodinelove on Sunday, 22nd December 2013 @ 08:30:12 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The first dream

I have seen so many beautiful things in my life.
I have seen a blanket of stars
The sky naked and shining
I have stood beneath a rain
Painful and unforgiving
I have climbed the peak of a valley
To see the sun set over its own shadow
I have seen light broken by water
The reflection of trees in the moonlight
Watching through the foggy banks
Of my home

I have witnessed the power of love
A winter night full of stars
Fields of grass and straw
A deep blue sky

I have given my soul to the thirst of my own desire
I have seen the rivers tumbling across smooth stone
The height of a fire spiraling into darkness
I have seen the mountains

I have had many dreams in my life
The letters in the maw
Of love and fantasy
The words that give me hope
The tragedy

I have longed for the rain
Stood in my own pain
I have feared

I do not know my first dream

The skies were always clear

Copyright © iodinelove ... [ 2013-12-22 20:30:12]
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Re: The first dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 01:16:57 AM AEST
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A master piece of beauty.
Good work my friend.

big huggs, blessings and Happy Jesus b day,
emy
It's always thrilling for me to see your work.

Re: The first dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 05:46:51 PM AEST
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I have seen a good poem. :) I walked through the images with this read. What more could I ask for.

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