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inviting us to fly away.
Adventure looms at the horizon,
should we go or should we stay?
We think and dream,
of strange beauty and exotic pleasures,
of uncharted bodies,
with never ending treasures.
We land on imaginative shores,
eating from the fruits of life.
We are the hunters of our own fortune,
from this new land we thrive.
The sun always shines
and the air is cherry sweet.
Everyone seems happy here
only smiles and grinning teeth.

In our minds

we jump from planet to planet,
only to find ourselves back home.
Why is staying never an option,
until you are ready to go. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 73 [informant] => saesori [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

In our minds

Contributed by saesori on Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 06:02:13 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Clear skies scream joyfully
inviting us to fly away.
Adventure looms at the horizon,
should we go or should we stay?
We think and dream,
of strange beauty and exotic pleasures,
of uncharted bodies,
with never ending treasures.
We land on imaginative shores,
eating from the fruits of life.
We are the hunters of our own fortune,
from this new land we thrive.
The sun always shines
and the air is cherry sweet.
Everyone seems happy here
only smiles and grinning teeth.

In our minds

we jump from planet to planet,
only to find ourselves back home.
Why is staying never an option,
until you are ready to go.

Copyright © saesori ... [ 2013-12-15 18:02:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In our minds (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 06:36:33 PM AEST
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great write sort of reminded me of the diversity course I have just completed. :)

Re: In our minds (User Rating: 1 )
by JimKoz on Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 07:06:54 PM AEST
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I like! Very much so.

Re: In our minds (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 08:26:18 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. A very mystic feel to it, almost like you envisioned this world in order to be inspired to write, sort of materialising the ideal. Nice. Check out Shelley's 'Witch of Atlas'. You will like it.

Re: In our minds (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 16th December 2013 @ 01:04:53 PM AEST
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Yes its good to fantasize. It keeps us sane lol good write.

Greetings
Rus

Re: In our minds (User Rating: 1 )
by mick on Monday, 16th December 2013 @ 04:30:06 PM AEST
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Great wright

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