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Array ( [sid] => 177319 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I could wipe the smile off all your damn faces. [time] => 2013-12-11 22:00:32 [hometext] => Something I wrote when someone went too far. [bodytext] => I didn't appreciate when you laughed at me, When I couldn't find the words to say
did it make you feel good? Well I tell you you're lucky. Lucky the hell to be alive damnit.
Couldn't you see what you did? Well I tell you it wouldn't happen again.
Next time I wont be silent. You will wish you never had said those things.

I can't help it do you think it's my fault?
Do you really think think I want to be like this?
You think I enjoy being nervous?
You think you're better because you can talk and I can't?
Do you think not being confident is something I wanted?
Did you think I would start talking if you laughed at me when I didn't say anything?

You probably never even thought about that did you, you bastard?
Did you? You didn't did you. I hope you don't know what you're doing.

I didn't appreciate it when you said those things to me.

I can't help but think if you were in my shoes you wouldn't do half as well as me.

I wouldn't be as mean as you are.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 102 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Dagger-of-the-mind [notes] => Spelling corrected per request ~ Moderator_18 December 11, 2013 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
If I could wipe the smile off all your damn faces.

Contributed by Dagger-of-the-mind on Wednesday, 11th December 2013 @ 10:00:32 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I didn't appreciate when you laughed at me, When I couldn't find the words to say
did it make you feel good? Well I tell you you're lucky. Lucky the hell to be alive damnit.
Couldn't you see what you did? Well I tell you it wouldn't happen again.
Next time I wont be silent. You will wish you never had said those things.

I can't help it do you think it's my fault?
Do you really think think I want to be like this?
You think I enjoy being nervous?
You think you're better because you can talk and I can't?
Do you think not being confident is something I wanted?
Did you think I would start talking if you laughed at me when I didn't say anything?

You probably never even thought about that did you, you bastard?
Did you? You didn't did you. I hope you don't know what you're doing.

I didn't appreciate it when you said those things to me.

I can't help but think if you were in my shoes you wouldn't do half as well as me.

I wouldn't be as mean as you are.





Copyright © Dagger-of-the-mind ... [ 2013-12-11 22:00:32]
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Re: If I could wipe the smile off all your damn faces. (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 12:13:22 AM AEST
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Yeah, I felt the same when I was ridiculed and beaten down by other people. The rage and sorrow that I felt. Sorry your having a hard time but those people who do stuff like that are really weak. Your the strong one. Because they choose to hurt others. While you wouldn't do that. So that makes you a better person and stronger for it. Best wishes♥


Re: If I could wipe the smile off all your damn faces. (User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on Saturday, 14th December 2013 @ 07:48:28 AM AEST
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I am sure that the poet is correct
Many behave like that indecently
They don't possess any mercy
They hurt our feelings very badly

God alone must give an answer
Heart is feeling extremely sad
Can God impart them a lesson?
They make us all highly dejected.

mvvenkataraman




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