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Array ( [sid] => 17731 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => One Day to Feel Complete [time] => 2003-05-17 23:05:00 [hometext] => This is all me. [bodytext] => Feeling all alone
Wanting love to be shown
Having so much to share
Just wanting someone to care

Finding ways to release the pain
Wondering if I was still sane
Building walls around me
Hoping someone would see

Then from nowhere
She suddenly is there
Now I share my secrets
My sunshine and frets

Knowing she'll be there for me
This fills my heart with glee
Having someone to lean upon
From dusk until dawn

Now I wait to feel complete
To kneel down at her feet
Waiting to hear her say she'll be mine
To share my world for all time

Now we both wait
To share each other's fate
Going through life having so much fun
Waiting for that day to be joined as one
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 21 [informant] => JJTiger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

One Day to Feel Complete

Contributed by JJTiger on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Feeling all alone
Wanting love to be shown
Having so much to share
Just wanting someone to care

Finding ways to release the pain
Wondering if I was still sane
Building walls around me
Hoping someone would see

Then from nowhere
She suddenly is there
Now I share my secrets
My sunshine and frets

Knowing she'll be there for me
This fills my heart with glee
Having someone to lean upon
From dusk until dawn

Now I wait to feel complete
To kneel down at her feet
Waiting to hear her say she'll be mine
To share my world for all time

Now we both wait
To share each other's fate
Going through life having so much fun
Waiting for that day to be joined as one

Copyright © JJTiger ... [ 2003-05-17 23:05:00]
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Re: One Day to Feel Complete (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:44:25 PM AEST
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Really nice! shows your feelings very well *sniffle* -eemo

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