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all my friends have said
you’ve got inside my head;
I can’t think for myself
too long upon the shelf

but I know you very well
you’re my angel, up from hell;
sometimes you’re so unkind
(my love has made me blind)

kiss me hard on the lips
and tell me you are mine;
a little lie is all I need
to savour the divine;
a little love to heal the heart
and satisfy the soul;
so much built on fantasy,
but it almost makes me whole

now all my friends have gone
and I’m feeling so alone;
but I’m slave to your caress,
so I might as well profess…

break my heart
and steal me blind
—I don’t mind
(just treat me kind).
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Treat Me Kind

Contributed by spike on Saturday, 30th November 2013 @ 04:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

all my friends have said
you’ve got inside my head;
I can’t think for myself
too long upon the shelf

but I know you very well
you’re my angel, up from hell;
sometimes you’re so unkind
(my love has made me blind)

kiss me hard on the lips
and tell me you are mine;
a little lie is all I need
to savour the divine;
a little love to heal the heart
and satisfy the soul;
so much built on fantasy,
but it almost makes me whole

now all my friends have gone
and I’m feeling so alone;
but I’m slave to your caress,
so I might as well profess…

break my heart
and steal me blind
—I don’t mind
(just treat me kind).

Copyright Â© spike ... [ 2013-11-30 16:46:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 02:06:09 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 07:02:59 AM AEST
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Ditch her!
clever poem though the last part is genius

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Monday, 2nd December 2013 @ 04:12:24 PM AEST
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I understand that kind of relationship. Its kinda like your addicted to that person that you know isn't good for you. "Break my heart and steal me blind-I don't mind (just treat me kind) lol That was funny because I so know that feeling.

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 3rd December 2013 @ 01:10:34 AM AEST
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ahh thee addiction of love

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 3rd December 2013 @ 04:16:40 PM AEST
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"a little love to heal the heart
and satisfy the soul;
so much built on fantasy,
but it almost makes me whole"

awesome lines!!!...
loved the whole piece but these lines really stand out.
great work!

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 9th December 2013 @ 07:50:34 AM AEST
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Spikers,
Smitten, my friend, smitten!!
I remember seeing an old western movie from the 70's about mountain men, and one of the
characters said in it, and I quote .... ''A woman's bosom can be the hardest rock found.''

Tread carefully, mate.

Spud

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by JimKoz on Tuesday, 10th December 2013 @ 10:28:32 PM AEST
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Love this! Kind of reminds me of a song by Third Eye Blind- "Deep inside of you." "Friends say I've changed, I don't listen 'cause I live to be deep inside of you."

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 05:59:36 PM AEST
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Hi spike :)

Nice one. . . my favorite line

"but it almost makes me whole"

I can so relate.

Happy, Merry & Happy again to you!

elle

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th January 2014 @ 03:14:20 AM AEST
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There's few who won't relate to this fine poem. Vulnerability is the root of our illogical trust. The desire to love and be loved is stronger than our common sense. It is often our friends who see the pitfalls and the hurt that lies ahead. We often know too, be we just can't help ourselves.

Red

Re: Treat Me Kind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2014 @ 09:35:46 PM AEST
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omg this is a masterpiece! every word, every line i was captivated and glued to my screen! what a poem! bravo!

hugs n' love nessa

roses at your feet
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