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[sid] => 177241
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Numb
[time] => 2013-11-29 18:22:48
[hometext] => for my sister.
[bodytext] => Soft unspoken words,
swept across my lips,
such reckless beauty hidden,
as harsh reality slips,
drinking rain from dark clouds,
to grow into the sky,
so i can find you once again,
and never say goodbye.
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[counter] => 380
[topic] => 8
[informant] => deusdeira
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[ratings] => 0
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AmericanTragedy
)
Numb
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Friday, 29th November 2013 @ 06:22:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Soft unspoken words,
swept across my lips,
such reckless beauty hidden,
as harsh reality slips,
drinking rain from dark clouds,
to grow into the sky,
so i can find you once again,
and never say goodbye.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2013-11-29 18:22:48]
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Re: Numb
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th November 2013 @ 10:21:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th November 2013 @ 01:49:11 AM AEST
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Very sad. I lost my sister in August of 2006. I wouldn't say good-bye. On her last day, I told her I'd see her on the other side.
Very poignant yet beautifully written.
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Re: Numb
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by Voyager on
Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 02:13:10 AM AEST
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These lines are brilliant:
drinking rain from dark clouds,
to grow into the sky,
Nice write. |
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Re: Numb
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by thezenmonkey on
Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 06:55:40 AM AEST
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I find your writing really beautiful!
You've got yourself a fan! |
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Re: Numb
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by gypsymaddness on
Monday, 2nd December 2013 @ 04:18:24 PM AEST
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| Beautifuland sad at the same time. Makes me think of all the people I never got the chance to say goodbye to... |
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2014 @ 07:41:53 AM AEST
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| simpel (in a good way!) and beautiful and sad, I like your writing |
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Re: Numb
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 07:42:37 PM AEST
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so sorry for your loss, this is so beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Numb
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by Jecks on
Monday, 21st January 2019 @ 08:32:47 PM AEST
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| Definitely stirs up feelings of loss and regret. You did a wonderful job of writing this and expressing yourself. |
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st May 2020 @ 06:12:41 AM AEST
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I/'/m not sure how I haven/'/t read your poems before but you/'/re very talented.
/'/drinking rain from dark clouds,
to grow into the sky/'/
Absolutely beautiful line. This is the type of poetry I love. It/'/s graphic and illustrative. |
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Re: Numb
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 19th February 2022 @ 01:27:31 AM AEST
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“To grow into the sky”.
The sentiment behind it, and this poem as a whole is truly beautiful.
I’m very sorry for your loss.
~Scorp |
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