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I come for acceptance
Absolve of me of sins
Return me to innocence
Grant me reprieve
Excuse my insolence
I am on my knees
I bare no witness
A crime committed
Life stolen
Unquestionably broken
Lost among the forlorn and hopeless

Many days have passed
Since the last time I saw your face
Beginnings that began so intense
Dwindled to a lonely end
A somber pace
In my regrets
I search for a better self
With pain as my only friend
An eerie peace breathes new life
At ease now
Submerged beneath the light

Bestow on me a privilege
To enjoy natures mistress
With a rush of wind
Comes self forgiveness
With a touch of truth
I step forward

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Unprepared

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 26th November 2013 @ 12:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Indisputably broken
I come for acceptance
Absolve of me of sins
Return me to innocence
Grant me reprieve
Excuse my insolence
I am on my knees
I bare no witness
A crime committed
Life stolen
Unquestionably broken
Lost among the forlorn and hopeless

Many days have passed
Since the last time I saw your face
Beginnings that began so intense
Dwindled to a lonely end
A somber pace
In my regrets
I search for a better self
With pain as my only friend
An eerie peace breathes new life
At ease now
Submerged beneath the light

Bestow on me a privilege
To enjoy natures mistress
With a rush of wind
Comes self forgiveness
With a touch of truth
I step forward

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Copyright © Jyssvw22 ... [ 2013-11-26 12:20:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unprepared (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 26th November 2013 @ 06:06:00 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
It's very thought provoking.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Unprepared (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 27th November 2013 @ 09:23:47 PM AEST
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I'm digging this one. It makes me think of coming back to a place or situation that once felt safe/good. Perhaps too much has happened to go back to "the way it was", but a new foundation can always be built. Anything can get better, and the first step is getting honest and taking that first step forward... As you so aptly put it :)

~Scorp

Re: Unprepared (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Thursday, 28th November 2013 @ 05:27:36 PM AEST
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Deep and honest. I like it

Greetings
Rus

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