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What can I do?
Breaking in pieces;
Feeling true blue.

You're coming apart;
What can you do?
I want to help, but
I can't see through.

Picking up pieces;
Card by card.
Trying to do it
Is really so hard.

I like a challenge;
Whatever we need.
I have faith that
We shall succeed. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 48 [informant] => speedy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Cracking Up

Contributed by speedy on Thursday, 21st November 2013 @ 06:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm falling apart;
What can I do?
Breaking in pieces;
Feeling true blue.

You're coming apart;
What can you do?
I want to help, but
I can't see through.

Picking up pieces;
Card by card.
Trying to do it
Is really so hard.

I like a challenge;
Whatever we need.
I have faith that
We shall succeed.

Copyright © speedy ... [ 2013-11-21 18:13:58]
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Re: Cracking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 08:54:16 PM AEST
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I've had more than a few of those days... broken pieces no l longer identifiable as to which one fits where and they seem to be strewn everywhere, a real sinking feeling of despair twinged with the requisite self loathing to boot.
For me - the way out is to see this in someone else.
This is a positive poem I think.

Thanks man!

Peace!

Re: Cracking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 3rd December 2013 @ 01:01:27 AM AEST
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Falling apart....I know that feeling.
well done.

Re: Cracking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 22nd March 2014 @ 02:32:01 PM AEST
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I find this a little vague, but the sentiments resonate. I do like how you presented each stanza with the different view points and outlooks. Keep it up!

~Scorp

Re: Cracking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 07:33:04 PM AEST
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even on a bad day you write so effortlessly!
i liked how at the end you realize you will make
it, beautiful job hanna:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Cracking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 06:03:31 PM AEST
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I/'/m with ladyfawn on this.
Beautifully written!!!!!

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