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A sound of music
A star in the night sky
The voice of a child

In all of those, your face appears!
It breaks me open Darling...instantly!
As does lightning through mist

Your face appears... And I cry

Our trust already exists...and it's complete!
The instant our eyes met....we knew... and will know...always...my Sweetness

Like making love with light!
The trust existed before we did... In this life... In our synchronicity

Your face appears....as lightning through mist...and I cry

I cry from the longing... and from your beauty
You are that lightning...you are that mist... but it's just an image

An image in the music
...in the sky
...In that voice

You ARE that music, that sky...that voice!

They are you!
They are you!
They are you!

and I cry - My Darling, my Love...when we are not together

By Chester Juall [comments] => 1 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 2 [informant] => trublu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

As Lightning in Mist

Contributed by trublu on Sunday, 27th October 2013 @ 06:05:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The thought of you makes me cry... in public!

A sound of music
A star in the night sky
The voice of a child

In all of those, your face appears!
It breaks me open Darling...instantly!
As does lightning through mist

Your face appears... And I cry

Our trust already exists...and it's complete!
The instant our eyes met....we knew... and will know...always...my Sweetness

Like making love with light!
The trust existed before we did... In this life... In our synchronicity

Your face appears....as lightning through mist...and I cry

I cry from the longing... and from your beauty
You are that lightning...you are that mist... but it's just an image

An image in the music
...in the sky
...In that voice

You ARE that music, that sky...that voice!

They are you!
They are you!
They are you!

and I cry - My Darling, my Love...when we are not together

By Chester Juall

Copyright © trublu ... [ 2013-10-27 18:05:51]
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Re: As Lightning in Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th October 2013 @ 11:19:14 PM AEST
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That's a great poem! Thank you for posting it.

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Tim

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