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I thank the one that gave me my anti political mind add in my lyrical shine there is no way you could get rid of me this time.
I'm a poet that lives in a dead society with a good heart, that is my liability.
I have the ability to put my heart in the winter, meaning I turn cold words turn bold that will make your back break and legs fold.
I can be so vicious with a lovely sickness that makes me ambitious with a wickedness that taste so delicious.
Might sound suspicious because I preach love but I still don't believe what's above.
His story is malicious while mine causes me arthritis.
I do stay cautious because I do have demons in my head that put me in situations where I could end up dead.
Instead I write poetry while laying in bed and I put my past encounters down so I can shed then get ahead [comments] => 2 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 55 [informant] => GREAT-WHITE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Great White

Contributed by GREAT-WHITE on Wednesday, 23rd October 2013 @ 09:02:54 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Its a political time so I stiffen up my lyrical find to a deep dark insidious rhyme.
I thank the one that gave me my anti political mind add in my lyrical shine there is no way you could get rid of me this time.
I'm a poet that lives in a dead society with a good heart, that is my liability.
I have the ability to put my heart in the winter, meaning I turn cold words turn bold that will make your back break and legs fold.
I can be so vicious with a lovely sickness that makes me ambitious with a wickedness that taste so delicious.
Might sound suspicious because I preach love but I still don't believe what's above.
His story is malicious while mine causes me arthritis.
I do stay cautious because I do have demons in my head that put me in situations where I could end up dead.
Instead I write poetry while laying in bed and I put my past encounters down so I can shed then get ahead

Copyright © GREAT-WHITE ... [ 2013-10-23 21:02:54]
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Re: Great White (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Tuesday, 29th October 2013 @ 06:56:10 PM AEST
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You say in eloquent words what I and some other poets face but can't put into words. Nail on the head and I saw so much within your words. Very great write, P

Re: Great White (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Wednesday, 27th November 2013 @ 12:14:28 AM AEST
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Hi, ive just read a couple of your poems and I really like them, they are very powerful dark dangerous and as you say delicious, your poems approach the same themes as my own and certain others , but from a completely obtuse angle, we are two sides of the same coin,and you cant have one without the other ,I shall certainly be reading more of your work, x

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