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Standing at the start of the ocean, constantly thinking, 3,2,1, GO!

Stuck in-between the same two thoughts, not able to pick one.

Playing Russian roulette with my heart just waiting for the gun.

Time moves in slow motion when it’s the only thing that will subside the distress.

Feeling every second when will it end, wishing every day for it to hurt less and less.

Moments of torture, not able to relinquish lingering knocking of my conscience.

Knowing what I should think but just lacking that definitive appliance.

Love isn’t a game so why do I feel like Im being played like a pawn.

Thoughts I wish I’d never had, dreaming that every morning will be a new dawn.

Wanting someone to listen, but not wanting to burden anyone.

All it took was for us to break up and my happiness was suddenly undone.

Wishing cupid had stayed well away from me.

Not left me feeling alone, left out at sea.
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Thanks for Nothing

Contributed by bryantjunior on Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 02:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My feelings packed into a bottle, just finding it incredibly tough to throw.

Standing at the start of the ocean, constantly thinking, 3,2,1, GO!

Stuck in-between the same two thoughts, not able to pick one.

Playing Russian roulette with my heart just waiting for the gun.

Time moves in slow motion when it’s the only thing that will subside the distress.

Feeling every second when will it end, wishing every day for it to hurt less and less.

Moments of torture, not able to relinquish lingering knocking of my conscience.

Knowing what I should think but just lacking that definitive appliance.

Love isn’t a game so why do I feel like Im being played like a pawn.

Thoughts I wish I’d never had, dreaming that every morning will be a new dawn.

Wanting someone to listen, but not wanting to burden anyone.

All it took was for us to break up and my happiness was suddenly undone.

Wishing cupid had stayed well away from me.

Not left me feeling alone, left out at sea.

Copyright Â© bryantjunior ... [ 2013-10-21 14:17:47]
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Re: Thanks for Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 22nd October 2013 @ 06:00:22 AM AEST
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if you can't get over an ex write about the good times then the bad then go and get that life you deserve

Re: Thanks for Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Friday, 29th November 2013 @ 04:38:47 PM AEST
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I can relate. Excellent write.

Hannah B

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