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But you know you cant keep a thing from me,
Its not that hard to see.
Like running from a storm, Your falling behind.
So let your rain come in as a hurricane.
no one else will see.
Only you and me.

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A Storm of Thoughts

Contributed by Dagger-of-the-Mind on Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 12:19:51 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You think no one can see.
But you know you cant keep a thing from me,
Its not that hard to see.
Like running from a storm, Your falling behind.
So let your rain come in as a hurricane.
no one else will see.
Only you and me.

Dagger-of-the-Mind, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.

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Re: A Storm of Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 01:55:30 AM AEST
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Hmm... I'd say this is hard to make out. I'm guessing (from my perspective) that; this person thinks that no one else is able to see who you are, that they think they can hide things from you, and the line "so let your rain come in as a hurricane" sounds to me like you're telling them to let it all out and that you'll comfort them in the end or maybe something else.

I could be wrong, but that's just my take on it. cx
Anyway, this is the first poem I've read on here since summer 2012 or my first time logging on since then. :P
Nice poem overall, keep it up! :)

Re: A Storm of Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by bryantjunior on Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 02:57:52 PM AEST
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Really powerful thanks for sharing really loved it, keep the poems coming. thankyou for sharing

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