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Soap Opera
Contributed by
darkkai
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Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Confused by question brought to me,
hidden meanings were not there.
Desires shown for another to thee,
taken aback to the unknown, where?
Does the forging of love be forced upon?
Deflecting question,
different answers.
Short fused I was,
long winded my student is.
Does the forging of love be forced upon?
The young are naive
the old are wise.
Experiance shows that not every one is a master,
LIfe shows the way of what is to the avid learners.
Can the forging of love be forced upon for a certain point of view???
used I was, for the love of another
anew my mind, for the hate in me.
bugged by this, all I can say is
"Learn on your own, make your mistakes
Learn on your own."
Copyright ©
darkkai
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2003-05-17 09:35:00]
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Re: Soap Opera
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:56:54 AM AEST
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I like your work..and
you're learning fast
nothing like a good mistake
to teach you a lasting lesson.
See..you're getting older
and of course, wiser...
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Re: Soap Opera
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by Bizzy on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:57:24 AM AEST
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Hello, darkkai, What an interesting way that you use your words! I liked the message, too.
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