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Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
Contributed by
ronald
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Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The lights are fading into the darkness,
As my soul is locked within these walls
Taken hold by the tides of emotion,
Feeling confused and depressed,
With the thoughts resounding in my head,
Getting stuck in this troubled moment,
Watching the clocks tick away…
The weight is falling upon me,
My soul tries to break free,
Trying to escape the oppression,
Trying to get a glimpse of daylight,
But reality wants to play its game,
And here I am again,
Watching the clocks tick away…
My defenses are now breaking down,
This disease of illusion is clinging tight,
To the very heart of my soul,
Bringing my knees to the ground,
Praying for intervention,
As I cry my spirit out,
Watching the clocks tick away…
And longing for home again…
Watching the clocks tick away…
Hoping for the joy again…
Watching the clocks tick away…
Wishing the cure of my disease…
Watching the clocks tick away…
Watching the clocks… tick away…
Copyright ©
ronald
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2003-05-17 04:35:00]
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 12:25:56 PM AEST
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Ronald, I love this poem a lot.. especially enjoyed how you ended it.... Great imagery..
Jenni |
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by vydana on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 03:07:47 AM AEST
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| Another great poem, you are a great writer :) |
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 05:54:29 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, kepp it up. |
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 05:55:03 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, keep it up. |
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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| i love this, clock and time pieces always move me and this one is excellent, great evanescent ending.....:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 12:19:10 AM AEST
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| Nice job Ronald ! :) |
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by norm on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 12:27:52 PM AEST
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Your poem is a-one rated
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I like to make a funny quote
It's hard because of what you wrote,
But LUCK, I can always send
To a new and hard-pressed friend...
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Re: Watching The Clocks Tick Away...
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by Qohinoor on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 01:22:12 AM AEST
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| Great write, no matter how heavy the words sound. |
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