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The time, just a little past ten
Evening has come for a short stay
It’s time for her sorrow again
The smile on her face she’s been holding
Suddenly, she lets fall
And the feelings begin unfolding
She comes out of her personal wall
As the world settles down for the night
She awakens herself from a dream
And the girl they all thought had her life going right
Is no longer the image she’d seem
She takes off the disguise she’s been wearing
And opens her heart to the truth
Behind closed doors she’s not caring
About life or love in her youth
And she sits by the mirror spilling tears
And cries by herself in the dark
A whole day of acting like she has no fears
Takes a lot from an empty heart
Inside she’s lonely and sad
But acts like she's fine in the day
Revealing her misery, secretly wishing she had
A friend, or a promise to stay
She’s ashamed of the truth she’s been keeping
Living her hours of daylight a lie
And this is the reason for in darkness she’s weeping
Taking time out from each day to cry
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Time Out To Cry

Contributed by ShannenWrass on Sunday, 15th September 2013 @ 03:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



All alone at the end of the day
The time, just a little past ten
Evening has come for a short stay
It’s time for her sorrow again
The smile on her face she’s been holding
Suddenly, she lets fall
And the feelings begin unfolding
She comes out of her personal wall
As the world settles down for the night
She awakens herself from a dream
And the girl they all thought had her life going right
Is no longer the image she’d seem
She takes off the disguise she’s been wearing
And opens her heart to the truth
Behind closed doors she’s not caring
About life or love in her youth
And she sits by the mirror spilling tears
And cries by herself in the dark
A whole day of acting like she has no fears
Takes a lot from an empty heart
Inside she’s lonely and sad
But acts like she's fine in the day
Revealing her misery, secretly wishing she had
A friend, or a promise to stay
She’s ashamed of the truth she’s been keeping
Living her hours of daylight a lie
And this is the reason for in darkness she’s weeping
Taking time out from each day to cry




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Re: Time Out To Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Anu on Monday, 16th September 2013 @ 04:36:49 AM AEST
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Very well written.

At some point in life, we can all relate to this poem. We always want to be strong on the outside but some of us are soft on the inside..
It has its own plus points though ! :)

Someone had said..Awakening is an INSIDE job! Those who can, DO. Those who cannot, struggle!

May be its time to DO something to change things around !!

Cheers !
Anu


Re: Time Out To Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Jalo on Tuesday, 17th September 2013 @ 07:31:19 PM AEST
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Lovely. I can relate.




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