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[aid] => mick
[title] => why silence me Thinking thoughts you thought
[time] => 2013-09-10 06:11:36
[hometext] => Thoughts on what i think you thought i thought andwhere has my poem gone, why has it gone?
[bodytext] => youve got to be kidding me,
your having me on,
id understand your disregard
if what i wrote down was wrong,
at the very least you must have been inspired or confused
or dare i hasten to say , intrigued and i guess slightly peeved and bemused
dont you know that its injust and dam right rude
to mute my thoughts,no matter what you thought,
even if you thought my thoughts thoughtless
i think i thought them all through
,and if you thought to think before thinking
i think youd think of others thoughts as i always do
now i was just thinking and i thought
i bet what you thought while reading my thoughts,
are different to what your thinking now,
when you think of it now
i think you would think about what your thoughts you thought to think, have you thought what i think you were thinking?
im thinking you should think about giving it some more thought
just think about rethinking your thoughts through
forget what you thought and think new thoughts
thoughts you never thought of thinking before you thought to think of thoughts,
while thinking about it you think your thoughts already knew
thoughts of thoughts and finking thoughts of thoughts and thoughts of thinking other thoughts thought up while thinking thoughts
now if you put more thought into thinking about what i thought
think what you think i was thinking
now gather you thoughts and just think for a moment
how your thoughts affect your thinking
and when youve thought about that think about this
are your thoughts thought through properly while thinking carefully
are the thoughts you thought you thought worth thinking
I think that you will think, as im thinking,
put your thoughts to the back of your mind and think about it now,
think to take your time be thoughtful of your thoughts while you are thinking,
think of thinking it through and think of your thoughts thinking too
with more thought than I thought you could think of with your thoughts
through thinking this thought
you will think that what you had been thinking you thought you thought while thinking before what i was thinking about my thoughts, now unthinkable and thoughtless of you,
im thinking what my thoughts on what youre thinking are and after thoughtfully thinking it through,
i bet you thought to yourself while thinking about what i thought that my thoughts were your thoughts thinking for you,
but if you think about what i thought you thought while i was thinking
you should find yourself thinking what thoughts did she think while thinking the thoughts that she thought while thinking i was thinking .
then your only thought now i come to think about my thoughts is you thought that through thought your thought about your thoughts would be thinking.
think what you thought you wanted to think about while thinking ,think about letting your thoughts do the thinking and think of nothing else , you thought you couldnt let go of your thoughts when you were thinking of your thoughts
on my thoughts i think.
I think i know what you thought you thought of, while thinking of letting your thoughts do all the thinking ,
you thought were thinking thoughts to think of but think about what you are thinking,
and ill think what i thought that your thinking,
think about what you think i thought i thought
and thoroughly think my thoughts through and then think,,
youd think to yourself "how thoughtless of me
"i never would have thought it true
but thinking about it now i think her thoughts on these thoughts true,
this thought ocurred to me after thinking through the thoughts i had been thinking about,
I was thinking of how thoughtless my thoughts had been, i was thoughtless of my thoughts and didnt think,
i thought thinking i had thought of thinking thoughts
of your thought i thought you thought when you thought of my thoughts
and how thoughtless i thought you thought i was,
unthinkable thoughtless thoughts of sorts
thinking thoughts thought
while thinking a thought
about thinking and thoughts.
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why silence me Thinking thoughts you thought
Contributed by
alicewhite
on
Tuesday, 10th September 2013 @ 06:11:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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youve got to be kidding me,
your having me on,
id understand your disregard
if what i wrote down was wrong,
at the very least you must have been inspired or confused
or dare i hasten to say , intrigued and i guess slightly peeved and bemused
dont you know that its injust and dam right rude
to mute my thoughts,no matter what you thought,
even if you thought my thoughts thoughtless
i think i thought them all through
,and if you thought to think before thinking
i think youd think of others thoughts as i always do
now i was just thinking and i thought
i bet what you thought while reading my thoughts,
are different to what your thinking now,
when you think of it now
i think you would think about what your thoughts you thought to think, have you thought what i think you were thinking?
im thinking you should think about giving it some more thought
just think about rethinking your thoughts through
forget what you thought and think new thoughts
thoughts you never thought of thinking before you thought to think of thoughts,
while thinking about it you think your thoughts already knew
thoughts of thoughts and finking thoughts of thoughts and thoughts of thinking other thoughts thought up while thinking thoughts
now if you put more thought into thinking about what i thought
think what you think i was thinking
now gather you thoughts and just think for a moment
how your thoughts affect your thinking
and when youve thought about that think about this
are your thoughts thought through properly while thinking carefully
are the thoughts you thought you thought worth thinking
I think that you will think, as im thinking,
put your thoughts to the back of your mind and think about it now,
think to take your time be thoughtful of your thoughts while you are thinking,
think of thinking it through and think of your thoughts thinking too
with more thought than I thought you could think of with your thoughts
through thinking this thought
you will think that what you had been thinking you thought you thought while thinking before what i was thinking about my thoughts, now unthinkable and thoughtless of you,
im thinking what my thoughts on what youre thinking are and after thoughtfully thinking it through,
i bet you thought to yourself while thinking about what i thought that my thoughts were your thoughts thinking for you,
but if you think about what i thought you thought while i was thinking
you should find yourself thinking what thoughts did she think while thinking the thoughts that she thought while thinking i was thinking .
then your only thought now i come to think about my thoughts is you thought that through thought your thought about your thoughts would be thinking.
think what you thought you wanted to think about while thinking ,think about letting your thoughts do the thinking and think of nothing else , you thought you couldnt let go of your thoughts when you were thinking of your thoughts
on my thoughts i think.
I think i know what you thought you thought of, while thinking of letting your thoughts do all the thinking ,
you thought were thinking thoughts to think of but think about what you are thinking,
and ill think what i thought that your thinking,
think about what you think i thought i thought
and thoroughly think my thoughts through and then think,,
youd think to yourself "how thoughtless of me
"i never would have thought it true
but thinking about it now i think her thoughts on these thoughts true,
this thought ocurred to me after thinking through the thoughts i had been thinking about,
I was thinking of how thoughtless my thoughts had been, i was thoughtless of my thoughts and didnt think,
i thought thinking i had thought of thinking thoughts
of your thought i thought you thought when you thought of my thoughts
and how thoughtless i thought you thought i was,
unthinkable thoughtless thoughts of sorts
thinking thoughts thought
while thinking a thought
about thinking and thoughts.
Copyright ©
alicewhite
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2013-09-10 06:11:36]
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Re: why silence me Thinking thoughts you thought
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 10th September 2013 @ 07:26:00 AM AEST
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| is this a bible or a poem lol |
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Re: why silence me Thinking thoughts you thought
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th September 2013 @ 12:37:57 AM AEST
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Uh, I think your poem is right here. o.O
Admittedly, I'm sorta lost here but I do adore the way you can ramble on and on as the words wrap around and around finally coming home.
No one can really know what you're thinking. Well perhaps a mind reader, if they really exist. I believe people can be empathic but not sure about the whole mind reading thingy. Anyways, they can make their own interpretation but even when trying to explain, they sometimes still cannot understand and insist on their own self determined interpretation.
Quite impressive. Sort of confusing (no offense intended as I am easily confused).
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Re: why silence me Thinking thoughts you thought
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th September 2013 @ 03:58:09 AM AEST
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I think about thoughts thought while thinking of thoughts myself. My own, thoughts, I concede to be thoughtful yet half-mixed with those other thoughts I imagine other people think.
My thought is not anothers thought, I think, as though I was thinking it might be, even when I sit across the table, and look at the face looking away. I look away too, I'm thinking, even if I try not to, Strange thoughts, passersby strangers in the crowd thoughts, like I can pretend to read their minds, kinds of thoughts, I sometimes try to think.
I'm a bag of thoughts, misshaped thoughts all the time I think, but I didn't think,
there was proof, even if it was there clear as day. I imagined such, only later that day. My thoughts, collectively speaking about any given day, that is.
I love thoughts that don't require too much thinking,
Like honesty, being OK with not knowing exactly what someone else might be thinking. You know, when you can only guess, and they look at you, like you're reading their mind. Of course, it's only accidental happenstance that two incidental thoughts could ever become intertwined, to think otherwise would be borderline insanity, beyond fantasy, who would want that, I thought just now.
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Re: why silence me Thinking thoughts you thought
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th November 2013 @ 01:35:09 AM AEST
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Maybe I figured some of this out. Again, though, I meant what I said before and that this is very impressive. But I had a recent conversation with someone and your author's note came to mind. Thinking what I was thinking of what I thought about when I first saw that note and this poem. :)
You are a very very intelligent person but it perplexes me that you (and others...you're not alone) and with that intelligence and the ability to read fail to read the rules on the site (and remember them) and the basics when you click the submit poetry button. this is not an intention to anger you so I very much hope this does not anger you, but failure to read these basic rules and full site rules and then getting upset about poems being removed/rejected is absurd. That is like saying, I was speeding, yes, but I'm upset with the officer for giving me a citation. Or in any other facet of life, like, perhaps, not reading contract and getting upset later if a contract is enforced.
Perhaps the poem being removed was indeed a misinterpretation by the moderator (I didn't see it) but seeing you have submitted at least two other poems that were not yours makes me wonder if you also tried to slip something else through trying to bend to the exception another rule of hey mine do not apply. I'm me, I deserve the exception. Just saying.
Remember this is a family site and the general area of the site is geared to family oriented.
As for as sharing something that isn't your own writing, there's always the forums here for that. Then you can give full credit to the author and share with others as you would like.
But when you click submit poetry you acknowledge the poem is yours.
When you sign up, you acknowledge you have read the rules which clearly state the poem must be yours (first three rules) and specifically what I think you might be referring to here, rule 5 probably came into play.
Best regards and take care.
Thank you,
Tim |
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