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Array ( [sid] => 176838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Forget [time] => 2013-09-09 19:02:55 [hometext] => this one is about my best friend who hung herself a year ago..love you! [bodytext] => The days go by with so much pain.
My tears flow down like pouring rain.
I can't accept that your no longer here.
Just a few days will make it one year.
Blaming myself for not being there for you.
Maybe if i was you'd be with me too.
My heart is aching when you cross my mind.
That last piece of you is so hard to find.
Everyday I have to hold my head high.
Not wanting people to always ask why.
I will never forget the day of your death.
I'll hold onto it until i share my last breath. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 139 [topic] => 36 [informant] => chlois [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Never Forget

Contributed by chlois on Monday, 9th September 2013 @ 07:02:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The days go by with so much pain.
My tears flow down like pouring rain.
I can't accept that your no longer here.
Just a few days will make it one year.
Blaming myself for not being there for you.
Maybe if i was you'd be with me too.
My heart is aching when you cross my mind.
That last piece of you is so hard to find.
Everyday I have to hold my head high.
Not wanting people to always ask why.
I will never forget the day of your death.
I'll hold onto it until i share my last breath.

Copyright © chlois ... [ 2013-09-09 19:02:55]
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Re: Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Monday, 9th September 2013 @ 07:46:10 PM AEST
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beautiful like a prayer, im sorry for your loss I feel your pain through your words, i would like to imagine that she now knows how much she was truly loved, I believe physical transition is not the end for any of us,, the soul transcends and finds peace,,, i hope you don,t mind me relaying my thoughts and above all i hope
my words offer some assurance and peace of mind to ease the suffering you are experiencing,, take care and i hope it gets easier for you to cope with in time xxx

Re: Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Monday, 9th September 2013 @ 11:08:08 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for your loss! I to lost a couple friends in wich I blamed myself for! Both have been quite a few years ago but we still can't help but feel we could have done something! So my writing replaced my hurt, anger, etc.. To everything!! I pray you can find peace in this horrible incident and continue to write, for it is a great release of so much emotion that we can not express to others!! Touching and wonderful piece you wrote, and in time the pain will ease because deep down we realize our friends are still there if we just listen!! God bless

Re: Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwreck on Wednesday, 11th September 2013 @ 08:30:04 PM AEST
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Keep your head up, I know and feel your pain. Lost a few friends the same way....All I can offer beyond condolences is this, always remember we are spiritual beings having a human experience ..not the other way around. When I went through this a book helped me tremendously it's called Many Lives, Many Masters by Dr. Brian Wiese ...give it a look. You WILL meet again
M.F.R.

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